Please help feedback on my $5000 promotion ?

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by jeffeyw723, May 16, 2011.

  1. #1
    PLEASE NOTE: I'm not trying to get a link, a sale or whetever. I just need ADVICE. If I'm posting in the wrong place, forgive me. I've never seen this kind of promo done before and I'm gambling I won't lose my ass.
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    Hello Everyone,

    I'm new here and I know it's probably bad form to ask a favor with a first handshake, but nonethless...

    I'm in a bind and I really could use an honest 11th hour opinion.

    I've created a cross-promotion around 2 product launches. It kicks in today at noon with the launch of Go Click Cash and continues with the release of The Facebook ATM Wednesday. I have tied these 2 products together through the bonus offerings on each product mini-site, and a $5000 rafffle.

    Maybe you can take a look and give me some honest feedback before kickoff?

    The sites are FacebookATMreview.NET and CompareGoClickCashBonuses.com.

    (BTW if you're selling GCC w/a bonus, head on over to the 2nd site and post it.)

    Thanks guys. And if there's anything you need, just ask.

    Jeff White
    facebook.com/socialmUtantmedia
    tweet me @jeffeyw723
     
    jeffeyw723, May 16, 2011 IP
  2. TrueClove

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    Hi
    Your sites are really well done. You do not actually see how you make cash as the pitch is sorta "hidden"
    My opinion is to make it a bit more obvious how to buy what you are reviewing. Also the go click site boosts your competition a little too much. Anyway you are on your way to greatness none the less. Good Luck.
     
    TrueClove, May 16, 2011 IP
  3. jeffeyw723

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    Thanks for the advice. What do you mean "go click site boosts your competition a little too much"?
     
    jeffeyw723, May 16, 2011 IP