Contest t-shirt graphic redesign - $20 Paypal

I have a pretty simple design that I would like jazzed up. it's pretty plain and could use some color. Its for a t-shirt for a cycle trip later this year. The t-shirt will be white. Here is the current draft design.



Let's see what you can come up with.

John

 

Good day sir!

Do all the words in the image needed to be included? or just the "Stacy Ganz Cycle Works" ?

Thank you sir!

 

here is my try, let me know what u think
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Here is my effort,feel free to PM me if you like it,or require changes

 

I like the bike a lot. The word are a little hard to read in that font. Also, I think solid color letters may work better. Good start.

 

Like the concept but with the amount of words on the bottom it doesnt really flow well. Too hard to read. Also I am looking for color. I already have black & white line art. Thanks!

 

Thanks for your question. I would like the quote if possible as its an inside joke for us. Regards!

 

Here is another effort with some color added,and a diffrent bike.. resizable to any dimensions required

 

my try.





need feedback pls.

 

I like this one the best so far. Nice reserve colors. Only suggestion would be the bottom text box looks crowded. I know its a lot of text so maybe the box should be a little taller for more depth. Otherwise I like the colors and look.

 

My try :

 

Here is my try, please give a feeback...

 

buckeyejohn - thx for the feedback.

revision.

 

my try..

 

My try:

 

Very nice. I like the colors and the graphic image. I am not sold on the first line of text (name of group). I do not like how they run together. It is hard to read. The second line is fine. If you could tweak that first line you'll be good.

Thanks

 

Thanks. not really the direction I am interested. Its a mountain bike and not a road bike. Thanks anyway.

 

Hi incomebiz, thanks for the revision. I think I misspoke when I said depth as I do not like the bevel look of the boxes around the text/graphics. I do like that the text is larger and on two lines. its easier to read.

 

thx for the feedback...

revision.

 

Any feedback on my entry?