need review for my fashion site

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  2. ziv1

    ziv1 Peon

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    #2
    Remove the 328/280 ad and place it elsewhere.
    Money is not the issue when staring a website but keeping visitors on the site.
    but the site looks good. vesy good.
     
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    ^Agreed. Fix that.
     
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    The long header takes time to load.Other than that the website is very beautiful.
     
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    thanks guys for the advice, i'll fix it ASAP
     
    mikow78, May 9, 2011 IP
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    It looks very nice. But when someone comes to the site for the first time, the only clue they have as to the specific function of the site is the sub-heading "Here are fashion tips for women". Immediately thereafter starts the entries/articles. I think a welcome section with the idea and purpose of the site simply stated, would help. It could then lead the viewer to the various sections of the site and provide a beginning pathway.

    Also, you don't need the "Here are...". Just use "Fashion Tips For Women" for the sub-heading, or "Tips Every Woman Needs To Know About Fashion" so as not to be too redundant with your main title, "Women and Fashion".
     
    webjeber, May 9, 2011 IP