Copy Critique Please

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by The Niche Man, Apr 6, 2011.

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    Critique this sales letter, any opinions, constructive criticism or suggestions for improvement welcome.

    My helmet and shoulder pads are in place.

    Llnk To Sales Letter ----->http://thenicheman.com
     
    Last edited: Apr 7, 2011
    The Niche Man, Apr 6, 2011 IP
  2. contentboss

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    You forgot to paste the content into your post.
     
    contentboss, Apr 7, 2011 IP
  3. The Niche Man

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    Link to sales letter at TheNicheMan.com
     
    The Niche Man, Apr 7, 2011 IP