Can someone please check my website quickly for any grammar errors?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by lokers, Mar 23, 2011.

  1. #1
    hi there,
    English is not my first language, although I think I am doing quite well.
    I have just launched a new company website but I am not 100% sure if there are no errors (grammar errors). Could someone please read it quickly and point any bugs? There are only 3 subpages, maybe 5 minutes of reading in total... please :)
    www.code-digital.co.uk
     
    lokers, Mar 23, 2011 IP
  2. Ace Lasher

    Ace Lasher Peon

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    This:

    To something like this:

    code:digital provides a full range of web design and development services -- from user friendly web sites, to full fledged interactive web based applications. we build everything from secure e-commerce solutions to reliable content management systems. We offer fast and efficient service and deliver uniquley creative solutions to our clients. We're industry recognized experts in quality, usability and accessibility.

    This:

    To something like this:

    code:digital
    A cutting edge London based Web Design Studio that delivers affordable, cost effective solutions that lower your costs, inflate your botttom line and drive your ROI higher and higher for years to come.


    Personally, I'd have my primary page focus on the benefits of working with code:digital and save the About us stuff for the About Us page :)

    And make sure you use the active tense/ active verbs. It reads faster and sounds better.

    Grammatical and spelling errors:

    There are millions of websites on the internet, but only some of them are truly inspiring and beautiful. First impressions are very important. Don't let your website vanish inside the boring, anonymous crowd. The devil is in the details. (And he'll rip you a new anus with his pitchfork penis if you don't deal with him quickly.)

    Just kidding about that last sentence :)

    If you want more help, hit me up at my website (find the link in my profile). I can recommend someone who won't charge an arm and a leg (or a pitchfork penis) to help.
     
    Ace Lasher, Mar 23, 2011 IP
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  3. lokers

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    #3
    this is great stuff! thank you so much for help, I owe you a huge favour! :)
     
    lokers, Mar 23, 2011 IP
  4. lokers

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    hahahahaha, just LOLed so much : )
    Imagine this sentence on the live website, lol : )
     
    lokers, Mar 23, 2011 IP
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    #5
    Why don't you hire a professional to check it for you?
     
    contentboss, Mar 24, 2011 IP
  6. lokers

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    I am going to get one soon...
     
    lokers, Mar 24, 2011 IP
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    Wow that was amazing Ace that way you helped lokers. +rep
     
    Code_M, Mar 24, 2011 IP