Review my sales page :)

Hey,

I have finally got my sales page to a suitable standard and I would love to know what you marketing experts think. Would it tempt you to buy the product?

http://www.mp3venture.com/

Known problems:

- The 'buy now' button has not been completed
- The 'watch video' button has not been completed

Thanks everyone

 

Everything looks great & reads well. Nice layout & info flow.

The only thing I wondered, though, is ... Is this a monetization script? If so, you need to tell people in your headlines that this is a hot revenue generator.

It wasn't clear to me whether this was just a fun widget until I got down to the bottom of your page, where I read a testimonial that said something about making more money because of this. Many readers won't make it down this far on your page, so put this important selling point up top.

 

Great stuff from you. I hope many people would come and buy from you. All the best

 

Thank you for this feedback. I am currently working on your suggestion. Thank you for all your feeback everyone

 

It looks very nice and clear to understand. How are you going to be advertising it?

 

I think these are okay but you need to provide opt-in subscription form for your customers.

 

it's on the bottom left if you didn't see it i will have to make it more clear

 

In internet marketing basics, opt-in form must be the in the top right or left side bar of all affiliate or product sites.