Finding my sales pages dumb in making conversion

Hi,

I created products on flirting and made sales page for it to sell the product. I even hired a copy writer from outsourcing websites. Finally I used clickbank as a platform to sell my product. The problem i facing is that although I have many unique visitors my website hardly makes conversion. Can you please look at my website and give your review about the sales page. I trust it will be very helpful. Please visit my site by clicking here.

Thanks.

Jee

 

You changed very little since your last thread asking the same question.

You don't listen.


Whoever wrote that page did a piss-poor job.

Who did it?

 

your alexa is poor.. hm.. is that real [unique visitor?? or only machine??

 

A copywriter from guru.com made the sales page.

it has made only one sale since I launched the site. It would be really helpful if you give suggestions for modification.

 

I am getting both unique and machine hits.

Can you explain me clearly how and where I can place the links ?

How it will improve alexa ranking and how I ll get more unique visitors ?

 

Tweet the hell out of it. But before you do, get that page rewritten. I have to agree with Perry on this one

 

Well bad writing and content, do You really think this product will sell a lot in this day and age?