ok here is new link. please retry it http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8886/chefhome.jpg i m pasting it here also so that it loads here itself feedback appreciated vineet
I think now is a good time to do a contest update. This will be my final entry: http://www.photosquid.com/bbq2x.png Regards, Moogle!
My first attempt. Please let me know what you think. The character is 100% unique created in Illustrator so any changes (fatter/ skinnier, lighter/darker skin, hair color, etc.) can easily be made. Note: click image to view larger.
hi here is my second design http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7677/chefhome2.jpg pasting it below also feedback appreciated vineet
Thanks all for submissions! Mass feedback will be given in 24hrs, until then I will leave it open for new entries. After my next post, no other entries will be accepted-only revisions. Again thank you all.
Design looks great but with the current toon - I don't like it at all. Social media links needed only are: twitter Facebook Flickr
ok here is my revision same design uploaded on another hosting also http://i53.tinypic.com/14aafxj.jpg feedback appreciated vineet
here is my second revision http://i52.tinypic.com/4g24b9.jpg same design on another hosting http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9928/chefhome4.jpg feedback appreciated vineet
My Client is seriously considering this Design, i will give you his notes. 1) Try a more modern font for the logo (Helvetica Neu) Souvlaki Shop 2) The Delivery section: Place a SCOOTER before the word Delivery 3) The CLICK HERE buttons need a more attention.
He is not considering this design at all. Thank you for your submission. Looking forward to working with you in the future.
THis toon has impressed us alot! Since it is custom made here are the notes: 1) Remove moustache but place facial here under the lips. 2) Make character thinner 3) THe menu + contact icon + social media icons + Trading hours + phone number NEED better layout and more fancy. For instance: The phone number must be described as Deliveries with a ICON of a scooter + the social media icons must have a label "Connect with Us" + The menu area is not bad + The Contact Us can be placed with the social media icons as the 4th icon 4) The Order Now button in the speech bubble is not needed at all. 5) The logo should read " Souvlaki Shop "
1) The logo should Read: "Souvlaki Shop" (not one word) 2) Try a more modern font for the logo 3) The menu button needs better font + image 4) The email us can be an icon in the Connect with Us 5) The Deliveries section - NOW this is the most silliest part of your design!!! A Parcel, Really? Try using a scooter 6) The other 2 areas: Trading Hours + Connect with us is good 7) THe Toon..... It is not suitable at all. I showed you a refering link in the original post of what style toon i prefer, and this is no where near that.
Above I have made final revisions. No more entries are to be accepted. Those who have been given notes are the only entries considered. When new submissions are created then the client will decide on the winner. Thanks
Thank you for the feedback. I will work on the requested revisions. It will take a bit of time but I will get them done as soon as possible.
Is this what you meant with the hair under the lip? Or more of a traditional goatee? Uploaded with ImageShack.us I will post the rest of the revision later, working on getting the character right and creating a scooter icon. Will keep you posted.