Contest Logo Needed! $40.00 USD Paypal to winner!

I require a logo for a alarm company:

247alarms.com

Code (markup):

(they currently install home/business alarm systems and monitoring)

Hopefully this works out, since I will pay $40.00 even though I do not use the logo. I've been watching the logo contests here and see some really amazing work. Hopefully I can get what i'm looking for.

Prize: $40.00 USD
Deadline: 72 hours from now


Good luck. Hope to get some good entrys. Winner has a crack at 2 more logos!

 

try...

 

feedback appreciated

 

Feedback Appreciated..

 

Pmed my entry.

 

entry sent via pm.

 

my try

 

2 Entry sent via PM,,.
Comment Appreciated,,.

 

Im not sure about this, it may be from the background looking too hypnotic. Not a big fan of the gradiant.

 

I like the concept. the yellow/orange "a" could look more like a lock.

 

Im not too sure what the arrow and circle is supposed to represent..

 

I like the simplicity, and the 7 as the roof. but it took me 5 minutes to figur what the 7 was.

 

any feedback for me ? thanks !

 

Here are some changes,is it better like this?




And what about my first logo did you liked it?

here it is:



Thanks for the feedback

 

Not too sure, not a real big fan of the lock. The logo with the lock on the "s" I cant really see what it is on the third pic.

 

The first logo doesn't really get across the alarm portion, I like the creativity of the 7 as the roof on the first logo, but it still takes a moment to figure it out.

j.

 

I will tell you how to make one for $5 dollars! Trust me you will be making a professional logo withing 20mins MAX promise!