$200 header, 48 hours, paypal

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Donza, Nov 12, 2010.

  1. franzceen

    franzceen Well-Known Member

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    #81
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  2. franzceen

    franzceen Well-Known Member

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    #82
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  3. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #83
    I'm afraid your designs are getting further away from what I want :( Go back to the other design, I praised and work from there.

    Cheers Don
     
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    thepunnisher87 Well-Known Member

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    #84
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    feedback appreciated :cool:
     
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  5. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #85

    Hi
    Can you get a photo of an athlete sprinting and use transparency to blend it in. If you do a good job, or anyone else for that matter, I will pay for a similar photo/s from one of the stock photo websites if I have too. Also put the LOGO to the far left then have the athlete with words in the back ground. The words will be persist, endure , strive, enjoy , persevere , smile, defeat, challenge, improve, aspire, overcome, excel, attain. You don't have to use all of the words.
    Cheeres Don
     
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  6. thepunnisher87

    thepunnisher87 Well-Known Member

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    #86
    Here is with changes

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    feedback appreciated :cool:
     
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  7. Dante777

    Dante777 Well-Known Member

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  8. pehulz

    pehulz Notable Member

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    #88
    another revision
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  9. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #89
    Hi Dante,

    Great entry, but the logo could do with some work:) But seriously I don't really like those silhouettes they are too boring looking, they don't exactly look very inspired. Also the orange dividing line doesn't work in my opinion. Anyway it is good to see you entering as I was planning to contact you about the contest.

    But I've been basically writing comments, replying to PMs all day. Plus I have some stuff being done offsite as well. BTW is there a reason why only one person is using photos? I was planning to take some today at the local sports ground but haven't had time.

    Cheers Don
     
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  10. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #90
    Hi,
    Thanks for the changes. It defnitely is better, but I will have to get back to you as I still feel the design can be improved

    Cheers Don
     
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  11. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #91
    It's better but the clipart just doesn't work for me. Do you need me to provide some photos? Just tell me what you want.

    Cheers Don
     
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  12. pheonix89

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    #92
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    anything can be changed according to your feedback ....
     
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  13. aTo

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  14. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #94
    Good work, something different. You've got the mystery but the figures need to have a sense of speed movement. maybe a couple of them stretching for a question mark. I don't really like the white outllines either but I understand why you have them. Is there another way of making the figures stand out maybe a gradient.

    Cheers Don
     
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  15. jnjnnino

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    #95
    hello here's my try..

    please click image for full view!!!

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    regards,

    Jr just keeping it simple and showing more.. =)
     
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  16. pheonix89

    pheonix89 Well-Known Member

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    #96
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    according to your feedback anything can be changed ....
     
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    #97
    updated version anything can be changed

    Please comment

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  18. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #98
    Hi thanks for the entry. All the elements are there but they just aren't gelling.

    Cheers Don
     
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  20. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #100
    Excellent work. Aesthetically your definitely on the right track but can you drop the number of runners down to groups of two as people playing exercross will hardly, if ever be clumped in large groups when. And can you have some have some very faint question maks in front of the runners as if that is the reason they are running.

    Cheers Don
     
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