$200 header, 48 hours, paypal

Okay Darike. I hope you come back again as you are obviously a good designer.

Cheers Don

 

first revision

Any of the words can be change, if you have a suggestion please let me know.
Thanks

 

Hi Sarah
I like the fourth one the best but at this stage it is not good enough to win. If you want I will try to think of something simple you can do to your existing work to improve it enough to win. That way you can concentrate on doing other work. BTW you are the only one who I will be doing this for as you are the only one who has taken the photographic route.

Cheers Don

 

Here's My try:




Feedback Appreciated.

 

Hi,

Innovative entry! I like the idea of repeating the text it just has to be done more subtly

Cheers Don

 

Thanks For the quick Feedback, i Will Give a revision Soon.

 

My Entry:

 

Thanks for your work
I like the first header you did better my logo doesn't go together well with rest of the the text. Also are the athletes a different colour than the "x" in exercross that probably stops them from being in harmony. Could you try changing those please the text and the colour of the "x"or the athletes

Cheers Don

 

Hi,

There is a lot to like about your design

I think your treatment of the logo is the best by far, brings out it's dynamism

I like the colours of the background dark but not to dark.

But I don't like the city backdrop try using words/letters like most of the other contestants have done in the background
Also you have to get rid of the swimmer As I pointed out to another contestant swimming is only a tiny part of Exercross.
Thanks once again for your work
Cheers Don

 

My try at it


Full res - http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t105/sudden_striker/exercross.png

Awaiting feedback

 

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try my best.

 

The basic design is sound if a little rigid too symmetrical. But man those athletes are ugly.

Cheers Don

 

4 a bit different versions :

http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/4215/eexxcerd.jpg
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/190/xxxss.jpg
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7939/exxccers.jpg

Maybe 1 of this you like ?

 

3 a bit different versions, again :
--->http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4074/xxr.jpg
-->http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7512/exxercisms.jpg

 

Hi
Thanks for the changes number two, the one with the question marks, is very good

Thanks Don

 

The colour changes are fine. But I'll stick with orange. if there is one thing you could do is to put some transparent question marks behind the runners.

Cheers Don

 

Ok I will try to put that question mark. But I think its will not look good behind them.. its will be a bit overkill..

 

Thanks for the changes.While each element is fine there is a lack of balance and I"m afraid I don't know how to improve it

Cheers Don