$200 header, 48 hours, paypal

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  1. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #21

     
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  2. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #22
    The other one sorry..

    Don
     
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  3. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #23
    I really like it. I mean really like it. There are some changes you can make but I'll get back to you on them BTW is there anything I can do to make it easier for you to put real words in the background. Like if I supply a list what format should they be in. The more I look at your design the more I love it. One other thing is my logo no good as no-one seems to want to use it. Once again great effort

    Cheers Don
     
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  4. Sarahmclaughlanx

    Sarahmclaughlanx Peon

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    #24
    Okay, well i will put some other images in, do you realllly want the sihlouettes? Or is my entry okay apart from the swimming image?
     
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    #25
    this is my entry :

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    need your feedback....
     
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  6. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #26
    Thanks for your entries. The individual components are alright but there is no unity. BTW
    what's wrong with my logo?

    Cheers Don
     
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    darike Active Member

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    #27
    Im in! wait for my job.
     
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    #28
    Dont worry anything can be change, i mean if you want to put a real word into it, and the logo is just an example, i cant use your existing logo yet, because i have to edit it first, but dont worry i'll put it when i revise the header later. :)
     
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  9. Donza

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    #29
    Hi Sarah
    If I was you I'd stick to the photos, I really like them. The main flaw with your design was the swimmer was featured too prominently. However, a much smaller flaw is the design is probably too generic it would be great if somehow you could get the puzzling element into your design such as a hand stretching for a question mark or something like that. If you can achieve that you will have a great chance of winning.

    Cheers Don
     
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  10. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #30
    Thanks for the entry. It needs a lot of work though. About the only thing I'd keep is the background.

    Cheers Don
     
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    #31
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    #32
    Sorry for the delay. Well, first off drop all the different sports except for running, jumping . There are a lot of running sihlouettes out there here are some http://www.yourvectors.com/runners-silhouette-vectors then build some sort of flow with the runners. Do that first and see how you go.

    Cheers Don

    Cheers DOn
     
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  13. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Hi,

    Is that Keanau Reeves I see :) The background sort of reminds me of "the matrix" graphics. That's okay, But there is a lack of harmony in the overall design. The truth is if I could tell you how to create harmony I wouldn't be holding a design contest I'd be participating in them or at the very least doing my own designs. One thing you can change though is the athletes should be mainly runners.
    EDIT Actually I just had another look at the design and it is a lot more harmnious than I initially thought. But I still don't really like it. Sorry for this vague, wishy washy comment and that I couldn't give more constructive criticism


    Cheers Don
     
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    #35
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    didnt really get what you ment by a streching hand with a question mark sorry
     
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  17. Donza

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    #37
    Thanks for the entry. I really appreciate it

    I like the design. But drop the dancer and the biker. Concentrate on runners. Also if you want to win somehow you are going to have to get a puzzling element in.

    Cheers
     
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    #39
    I will think about it. Probablly I will send my job a bit later.
     
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    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #40
    Thanks for your attempt
    There are some elements I like especially the plain lettered background. the text of intrigue and inspire, an idea you might want to use is to have the athletes moving on platforms of words like. A person leaping could be be jumping off the words, REACH HIGHER BTW my logo is better than the one you used. Once again appreciate your effort

    Cheers Don
    First off my logo is better than yours. secondly here is an idea
     
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