$100 Design Competition - Carpentry Logo

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  1. Mikesblank

    Mikesblank Active Member

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    #21
    Hey,
    Thanks for the submissions so far.

    The client has said that he would like something carpentry/construction related integrated into the logo, like a house.


    #2,
    The logo is maybe a little to soft and rounded, the tagline below is a decent idea however.

    #6,
    The color scheme is a bit too bright, and the graphics maybe too simple.

    #7,
    The text is way too difficult to read and the house graphic looks strange. Second submission is too cluttered and is spelt wrong.

    #8,
    A good idea, but maybe looks too basic and needs a touch of sharp professionalism.

    #11,
    Too amateur, sorry.

    #12,
    The client's favourite so far, he'd like to see it in more colour schemes and says that the house should be straight instead of on a curve.

    #13,
    Not bad, the client didn't know what to suggest, possibly different texts and graphic positioning?

    #14,
    Great positioning and idea, but the text and execution possibly looks too simple and basic for a professional carpentry business.

    #15,
    Decent idea but still lacking in comparison to other submissions.

    #16,
    The 3 tall buildings don't really represent what the business is about, which is residential carpentry as opposed to commerical.

    #17, 18, 19,
    Too amateur compared to other submissions.
     
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  2. jhaye

    jhaye Active Member

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    #22
    How About Mine??
    Any Comment??

    REGARDS,
     
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  3. Mikesblank

    Mikesblank Active Member

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    #23
    Sorry, I meant #20 not #19. Your submission is not up to standard of some of the other submissions, better luck with your next entry.
     
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  4. watari

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    #24
    [​IMG]
     
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  5. Dante777

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    #25
    [​IMG]
     
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  6. Mikesblank

    Mikesblank Active Member

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    #26
    #24,
    Client likes it, not his favourite but certainly up there

    #25,
    Client loves this one, the yellow sun makes the logo look more like a holiday resort, but they said they would like to see the logo on the left in some different color schemes.
     
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  7. Mikesblank

    Mikesblank Active Member

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    #27
    #26,
    Clever design but looks a bit strange, the roof of the house looks more like a tent.
     
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    watari Well-Known Member

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    #28
    [​IMG]
     
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  9. Mr.LeGeNd

    Mr.LeGeNd Well-Known Member

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    #29
    Thanks for the feedback, Will Post a revision soon.
     
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  10. mudeyemoody

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    #30
    new concept for this project:

    version 1:

    Concept of letter H & B for their Initials forming the House. Simply to tell the target audience that we are a construction related.

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    version 2:

    A hammer in the middle with ruler on top symbolizes construction and accuracy.

    [​IMG]
     
    Last edited: Nov 7, 2010
    mudeyemoody, Nov 7, 2010 IP
  11. actioN

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    #31
    Improved logo:

    [​IMG]
     
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  12. Dante777

    Dante777 Well-Known Member

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    #32
    [​IMG]
     
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    #33
    Hello,
    i sent my entry in your PM. please check it.

    thanks
     
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    #34
    Here's a brandable one for a professional company.

    Feedback appreaciated.

    [​IMG]
     
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  15. Mr.LeGeNd

    Mr.LeGeNd Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Revision:

    [​IMG]
     
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    #36
    Thanks for the feedback , Revision :

    [​IMG]
     
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  17. Mr.LeGeNd

    Mr.LeGeNd Well-Known Member

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    #37
    Another try:

    [​IMG]

    Feedback please.
     
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  18. Shehmirdp

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    #38
    2nd try feedback is appreciated :
     

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  19. DrDesigner

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    #39
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  20. actioN

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    #40
    Another version, still waiting for feedback.

    [​IMG]
     
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