Hey, Thanks for the submissions so far. The client has said that he would like something carpentry/construction related integrated into the logo, like a house. #2, The logo is maybe a little to soft and rounded, the tagline below is a decent idea however. #6, The color scheme is a bit too bright, and the graphics maybe too simple. #7, The text is way too difficult to read and the house graphic looks strange. Second submission is too cluttered and is spelt wrong. #8, A good idea, but maybe looks too basic and needs a touch of sharp professionalism. #11, Too amateur, sorry. #12, The client's favourite so far, he'd like to see it in more colour schemes and says that the house should be straight instead of on a curve. #13, Not bad, the client didn't know what to suggest, possibly different texts and graphic positioning? #14, Great positioning and idea, but the text and execution possibly looks too simple and basic for a professional carpentry business. #15, Decent idea but still lacking in comparison to other submissions. #16, The 3 tall buildings don't really represent what the business is about, which is residential carpentry as opposed to commerical. #17, 18, 19, Too amateur compared to other submissions.
Sorry, I meant #20 not #19. Your submission is not up to standard of some of the other submissions, better luck with your next entry.
#24, Client likes it, not his favourite but certainly up there #25, Client loves this one, the yellow sun makes the logo look more like a holiday resort, but they said they would like to see the logo on the left in some different color schemes.
new concept for this project: version 1: Concept of letter H & B for their Initials forming the House. Simply to tell the target audience that we are a construction related. version 2: A hammer in the middle with ruler on top symbolizes construction and accuracy.
Here's my entry: http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn203/DrDesigner/HB-2.jpg Feedback is appreciated. Thanks, DrD