20$ Fast Logo Rework/Improvement!

Hey! I'm going to make it easy for you guys! I have this logo:

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/460/inspirationpalacesticke.jpg

and want it reworked. The concept is fine (but you could take ideas in/ideas out), what I want it is to look SLEEKER, more CONCISE and more PROFESSIONAL. I'm sure you can do this for me.

Just a few details:

- Take the 'tail' of the circle out.
- You can change the colors if you want.
- Write just 'Inspiration Palace' and NO tagline.
- The 'piece of land' below the castle doesn't really matter. You can take if off if you prefer.. the CASTLE matters!
- It's for www.inspirationpalace.com (get more ideas and inspiration from there)

I can't find the original files yet but I'll post them here if I do!

I'll pay 20$ to the winner via Paypal. Please keep your entries here and don't PM me! I'll give feedback at least 2/3 times per day. There's no limit but I want to have this done for FRIDAY.

Thanks a lot and keep questions here!

 

Here's my go at it :

The white line is just for watermark.



Feedback appreciated.

 

My entry:



Feedback appreciated.

Can I add it in my showcase/portfolio?

Thanks.

 

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Comments Appreciated

 

Srinivas.vasista - I am just curious what software did you use to make your prototype?

 

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Anything can be change as per your suggestion.

 

My entry:

 

here's my entry..
pls do give me feedback..
tnx..

 

my entry

 

looking awesome designs are here, go ahead folks. Great work!!

 

Ok guys great work! I'm thrilled to see so many good designs so fast!

My favorite are: , Brainsurgeon, angelart and divineworld (in no special order). Accipiter you have a great concept but it's not really what I'm looking for right now.

If you guys (the four I named and anyone else who wants to keep running) make a few tweaks I think it'll be good.

What I would like is a more concise, less bulky castle. Instead of 3 parts it could have 1 or 2 - and you are allowed to just change the design to something you find attractive. I love the flag but if you think your design looks better with out it, keep it off.

I wish I could give you more help on exactly HOW I want the castle to look like but I just can't find any concept online.

I'll keep giving you feedback! Thanks!

 

This castle is a bit bulky, but it has it's charm! Hope it serves as an inspiration to you:

 

Thanks for feedback .

Plz wait for mine
I will submit new version later tonight.

 

Thanks for the feedback.

Here's a revision of the castle :



feedback appreciated.

 

@Dante: love the concept, great idea! It's not really what I'm looking for in the first place but we could get to something. Don't really know which other suggestions to give you but maybe you can make the 'i' a bit thicker? Keep up with the good work!

@Brainsurgeon: I'm still not convinced with the castle - I want something more concise, less bulky, more minimalistic. Perhaps cutting the 'sides' out and working a bit on the middle? And try to make it cartoony/not to serious, something like the blue logo I showed you. Great work!

Thanks you two and looking forward for the others!

 

Here are a couple of revision from me :

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2.

3.

Feedback appreciated.