review my site all of you

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ayaha, Oct 8, 2010.

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    ayaha, Oct 8, 2010 IP
  2. premierwizard

    premierwizard Active Member

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    #2
    It's just a forum created by simple machines so not really much to review mate :(
     
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    ashfaq Peon

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    #3
    you are using SMF. But not this matter what are you using for your forum. because first time when i try to run a forum. i also was select SMF for it. But i think my work was a little bit better then you. there is no post all topics have 0000000.
     
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    premierwizard Active Member

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    I would probably recommend creating a theme for the forum so it isn't just a basic SMF template :)
     
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    JamesColin Prominent Member

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    #5
    Are you joking? You have a brand new forum with only... ONE post from you. And you managed to make one mistake in the title of three words, instead of Welcome to all you wrote welome. Please grow up a little and come back in 10 years.
     
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  6. ComputerGirl

    ComputerGirl Active Member

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    I would not be so strict to ayaha ... Yes, I can just agree that there is almost nothing to review and I guess that you are a little angry for spending your time to visit his forum, but still we all are learning and I think it is not nice to get such attitude instead of any advices that you probably could give.

    I think that ayaha forum is not done well, there are a lot of spelling mistakes, you should ask someone to correct it if you are not able to do it by yourself. Also you should put more suitable name to your forum, at least for me that name "'Enjoy Points" does not mean anything ... and also you could change the theme, for me this seams as some basic theme of forum and I really do not like something like that. And the last point will be that you should more think about that how do you think your forum will attract visitors, because at the moment I cannot imagine that somebody will go and start some discussions about your mentioned themes just simply like that ...
     
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    Droidman86 Member

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    not much to say, it's pretty simple, nothing created here other than a forum automatically created. Description should be added since as a first time visitor I would really don't know what the forum is about so I would close the page instantly.
     
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    JamesColin Prominent Member

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    #8
    I will make an effort when HE will make an effort.
     
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    pbmann1213 Peon

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    #9
    Well I looked at the posts and figured that it was a generic forum and nothing else needed to be said. I was wrong.

    The grammar on the website is terrible. I'm sorry for seeming so blunt, but there's random capitalized letters and punctuation marks everywhere. Not to mention way too many spelling mistakes.

    Sorry if I seemed rude, but take criticism for what it's worth
     
    pbmann1213, Oct 8, 2010 IP
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    You are probably right at least from one side, because he is not even answering anything to what we have discussed here ...
     
    ComputerGirl, Oct 9, 2010 IP
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    premierwizard Active Member

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    TBH I totally agree with the both of you, I was a tad dissappointed and annoyed when I loaded the site, I generally love seeing other people's work but this was just a simple forum install using the standard template. The fact that he is isnt even getting back in touch, to me, seem like he knows it's bad and doesnt particularly care.
     
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    bandorsson Banned

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    #12
    i think it is very simple...
     
    bandorsson, Oct 9, 2010 IP
  13. ayaha

    ayaha Well-Known Member

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    #13
    thanks all of you now i m doing work on it.and my doing work on the things which are highlighted.plz review now and tell wht changes i should make in themes
     
    ayaha, Oct 10, 2010 IP
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    I really did not like this. Nothing is unique in this one!
     
    boostinspiration, Oct 10, 2010 IP
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    Taufan Adityarahman J.U Peon

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    #15
    hi ayaha,
    I think your website is good.
    effective and not too many unnecessary sentences.
    may only need to add something like a picture or a color effect for more attention again.
    good luck with your website and I hope we can work together in the future.
    thanks.
     
    Taufan Adityarahman J.U, Oct 10, 2010 IP
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    ayaha Well-Known Member

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    thanks me intrested to do work togather if u plz pm me
     
    ayaha, Oct 11, 2010 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #17
    I'm not sure why you've chosen to do an english language forum when your ability in the language is clumsy at best. Could you not have asked a friend to proof read your forum names and descriptions before you went out asking for reviews... or included that in your review request?
     
    sarahk, Oct 15, 2010 IP
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    jvnvc_lksndr Peon

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    #18
    Holiday for eyes.Do not touch anything.
     
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    Orgasmotopia Peon

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    #19
    I get to your site, and..

    - I have no idea what your site is about, even about scrolling up and down
    - There's no content
    - The design doesn't inspire confidence

    I think you need to up the ante on the design and content, and also make it clear what your site is about right at the top!
     
    Orgasmotopia, Oct 15, 2010 IP
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    I think your website is Very simple
    and no creativity in your site
     
    sufiya_famida, Oct 17, 2010 IP