Hi.. I have developed new sales page for my flirting product. I didn't get conversions in my sales page yet. If you have a look and give your suggestions for improvement it would help me a lot. Please log onto www.magicalflirting.com Thanks in advance.
I viewed the Sales Page and it overall looks "Good". You can use more catchy words. Btw, did you market the link well??
You should improve the look and feel and also, you should "Make your words sell" (PS: Read this ebook, it's free and very very good).
I wrote around 10 articles and submitted in ezine. I pinged the website. Could you please provide marketing tips?
Hi just wanted to put my two cents in. For me the copy seems to be a bit short. The saying goes "Good sales copy should be as long as they should be..." Maybe add a little bit more meat into the story...With headers like "They laughed at me..." and so on and how you could eventually win over your friend richard in the next party..."As again it's not about the competition...but winning feels good." Also, statistically it's been proven that numbers like $37 or $39 is a compelling price for customers to buy, hence the overstuffin of products at that price. I believe $44 stands out from the rest, but not quite sure whether it's a good thing. Do try to experiment with that.
May your sales will not increased just because of your website structure, content quality, etc.. so its better for you that consult it with any seo firm they will give you the better solutions.
Well I'm not too crazy about the first stock photo of the woman in the suit... is that the best you could find?
Yeah, I was wondering that one myself. A woman in a suit??? The pictures need to get your potential buyers fantasising. That guy with his chin in his hand really needs to go. Put in pictures of cute, next-door type girls that your visitors can imagine being with. Example: http://www.hotornot.com/m/r/?emid=BMNUAYH Don't put in pictures of beautiful big-breasted women! Don't use the typical lame words like "hot," and "babes." Make your site real and believable. Put in a free tip on "how to meet a girl like this" next to each picture.
Hi all.. Thanks all for your reply. I have updated my sales page. please give your suggestion on the updated page.
Not sure, but `You Can' does not sound so affirmative. Why not put it as: Approach... Capture... Change..... <bang> Also un-capitalize the capitalized text in the first two lines. This will enhance the capitalized words in the third line.