here is some revisions that you ask for: Without the exclamation: new style: I hope you like it, and feedback if you want to change something =)
How about mine? Just give your valuable feedback. Also one of my logo (previous contest) is waiting for your feedback in your inbox.
Not the font I was looking for nor the exclamation...maybe try this one http://bit.ly/cCiJIA with different font
of course, here's the link to full preview: i55.tinypic.com/4jvw3q.jpg (click on image to enlarge) just let me know if there's still something you would like me to change