is this rewritten version okay? auoto rewritten by a software

original version:
The core software is built by hundreds of community volunteers, and when you’re ready for more there are thousands of plugins and themes available to transform your site into almost anything you can imagine. Over 25 million people have chosen WordPress to power the place on the web they call “home” — we’d love you to join the family.

after rewritting:
The core software used by hundreds of community volunteers and are you ready when there are thousands of plugins and themes to your site convert to almost anything you can imagine. More than 25 million people have chosen WordPress power they call "home" where on the Web — we want you to join the family.



any comments? thanks

 

great information sharing.

 

Hire someone to do rewrites for you if you need content to be rewriten. There is no software that will give you quality. You can find pretty ok rewriting services for about $1 per 500 words article.

 

it is just ok, which software you are using for re-write?

 

This is good enough for a software.

 

Save your time and effort... that software (like all spinners) gave you junk. The rewritten version is grammatically incorrect, and it doesn't make any sense. Would you feel comfortable posting that somewhere, knowing it was a reflection on you and your business? I hope not. You need to either rewrite things yourself, or hire someone to do it, because that rewrite simply doesn't cut it.

 

Yes.... it makes no sense at all. Rewrite it by hand, it would be quicker than trying to make sense of this!