Please visit this blog and tell me if i am lacking in some parts? I know one point i need to update more content. some thing else ? errors are appreciated. http://best-seo-india-services.blogspot.com
it is very bright. too bright. and your link color for the sidebars is hard to read against the background. other than that it looks ok
If you are planning to sell services, then it is always best to use your own domain and an email id based on it, to ensure that you get a more professional look and branding!
Well you do need better content. Yours is a bit hard to read. Not that it is bad, but it doesn't really flow for me. This is to me would be a turn off if your trying to sell SEO services. Because you would need to write a bit better. But, on the other hand your probably one of the best writers from India that I have seen on here. On to other issues. I didn't come across any broken links. I did not check for copied content. This is also something that you should do since your running a SEO service. You should check for this prior to posting anything on your site. I write all my own content for my content creation service. Your title seems ok. didnt check the tags. But, I did list your site in my to do list to do a complete SEO analysis. I will pm you the report when I get it done later today.
You can't write in English. Huge chunks of it make no sense at all - for example the first sentence "Millions of websites running by numerous people for betterment of their business and future." - it's rubbish - it doesn't mean anything. Either - hire a native English speaker to rewrite EVERYTHING on it. Or - and this is the better option, write it in your native language.
I didn't find any broken link on the blog. As you have made the blog just for testing, just add more pages on your blog and apply a fresh content over there. Use some plugins for better exposure of your blog. Apply Meta tags for your blog - like as Title, description and keyword to make your blog visible in the SERPs to rank better for your services. As you have made keywords and description but most impotant no title tag, Google give the main priority to your title tag, then description and in last for keywords. Make your description keyword rich, so that your mostly keywords of your title tag should be covered in your description. Work on your service page, explore your services and explained also that for visitors and search engines. As you are selling seo services to others, make some informative post on your blog to explain the services, concluding the benefits to avail such services and give knowledge about your services, because everyone is not aware about it. Apply your targeted keywords on your blog on each and every post related to what your page is describing and first of all make it for your main/home page. Because it's not possible to come on the blog before finding that in the SERPs. You have used "Best SEO Company" keyword in your blog and maintained the density of this keyword in your content. Just focus on some more keywords and improve density also of those. Always try to provide some more interesting and fresh material to your visitors, informative and knowledgeable, that would give your blog more exposure. Make your blog popularize, as you are aware the on-page and off-page optimization, make that proper and work on some smart work for Social media marketing and also on traditional ways. Don't let your blog stale, always make it fresh with some purely optimized and good stuff. I think it will surely help you for more exposure.
IMO you need to do 2 things... Hire a professional writing service to handle your content until your command of English is better. Tone down the site, keep it simple and neutral.