I wrote done but I guess there is still lots of things to change.. first of all an affiliate page I should add.. need your opinions about my website friends.. and also could someone tell me how can I see my converting point? http://www.becomeagirlmagnet.com thank you! Rick Cassidy
It's really awesome!!! (but this thread would be more useful if you actually added a link to your website)
Quick comment - Im not too sure the image for the header of a man and a woman shouting at each other is the right approach... imo images should always be positive... unless it is a "before and after" shot... which might be the idea you are going for, but imo it is just too aggressive and doesn't exactly fit..
A friend told me the same last day.. I will change it as soon as possible and also I should use the color of red.. right?
And a major typo on the site at the bottom on the checkout you have it as 'Add to Chart' instead of 'Add to Cart'
My advice would be: "Do not promote it unless you start all over again with a less amateuristic lay out."
Im creating my website with webstarts.com.. how professional can I create my website? or should I learn programming languages?
The font is way too large... and the website isn't centered in any browser. I'd definitely hire a professional designed/coder to have a look at the website. Al.
I couldnt find the way to center my website Al.. still working on it.. I see,there is still tons of work to do on that website..
i sort of like the 'girl at crosshairs' pic but not really a girl magnet sort of pic to me. but anyway, to more constructive comments, i think your page is too wide. make it a little more narrow so less effort is needed to read it (eyes move a lot less). your add to cart box should have the items combined, not putting all 3 of the pictures close together and the font there is way too big. hope that helps.
Your font makes me dizzy; it is way to large. Your graphics look pretty pixeled. Try to get more clear graphics On the top you have 86,2% success rate. You used a comma instead of a period. If you are going to be a vendor, I would for sure spend the bucks to have someone Like Dave from Extremewebsites do your site. It will be well worth it plus if you need to get affiliates, they will not promote your site as that may be an example of what the ebook is like (amateure) which will result in a lot of refunds. Good start just keep at 'er!
Yeah I agree! But if it's not positive, try and find humor in the problem. These type of images attract eye balls as well. As for the website, it definitely needs work. I think the design is too wide. Start by making the header smaller.
It looks like you are trying too hard to sell me something. I feel like I'm at a car lot and the sales people are stalking me but I'm trying to hide/run from them.
Hi Rick - I'm a little late in the game replying but here is my 2 cents - 1. Title - "Living the Secret" - should be "Living the Dream" 2. Site is too skinny - with your margins in at 1" either side ... cut that to .5 and make the site at least an inch wider - just looks scammy 3. The top image is too small.. .and you spelled "wil" wrong should be "will" - and you wouldn't capitalize "You" in that sentence- best to make them all capitalized but increase the image/font size 4. Image suggestion: a magnet attracting a group of girls - any good designer can make that header image for you. 5. "The Untold Secrets To Getting Any Girl You Want No Matter How Your Appereance is." - misspelled and grammar is incorrect - should be: “The Untold Secrets To Getting Any Girl You Want No Matter How Bad You May Think Your Appearance is.†... or something like that 6. "Without this formula, your social future will be a frustrating roller-coaster ride of hit-and-miss…" ... hit and miss what? 7. "...Read Every Last Word Of This Article & You'll Discover The Key To Become A Girl Magnet..." should be (at the least) "...Read Every Last Word Of This Article & You'll Discover The Key To Becoming A Girl Magnet..." 8. Become A Girl Magnet Set I think you mean: "Become A Girl Magnet" Complete Package 9. Change the font - a tad larger and more clean and pleasing to the eye 10. use arrows, checkmarks and shadowing. 11. You need an aff page - there is no purpose to be on CB if you arent using affs ok - thats all I can give you - you have some work to do - if you need more help - PM me - ... ok 1 more - your rate of 80% off is incorrect and the pricetag of $119 - not believable - knock that price down - (your percentage should be 83.24%... if you stuck with $119) Bluff