The right eyes doesn't look natural, maybe because the eye was in front her hair. Try to keep up to #4 and work your way to the end. Nice work by the way..
thank you, i know what you mean, i did work on the hair in front of the eyes, and can only be seen on my final finished drawing here below. (step 9 is not the final) i made it look a little see through though so the whole details of her eyelashes would not entirely disappear i also changed the color of the hair because i liked the tone a little better.
nice results. it would be difficult for beginners to actually do that without the sketch as what's been done here . http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/a-semi-tutorial-how-to-draw-a-semi-chibi-elf-boy-t46293s25.html
thanks! i wish i did have a tablet to draw the sketches digitally too. but i don't have one, and i think i am more comfortable drawing by hand.