Hi guys, I would like to request for a honest review of my affiliate website: boat building diy plans thank you
Very nice! The only thing I would say is that since the majority of the links on the page just skip the page to the bottom, the actual affiliate link should be differentiated somehow - either with much larger bold text, or with a highlighted button graphic. Just so it's absolutely clear and obvious what they have to do next. Or, just change all the links so they're active and take the customer immediately through your hoplink...
Very well done indeed! If anything at all, I would add a little bit more white space all around. It's kinda crowded at the moment. Regarding the red underlined headings, try a larger/bolder font and remove underline, as they steal away the focus from the actual links.
thank you, I agree, the hoplink should be a bit different, I did add a hover start hope that helps thank you, I did removed the underline and your right looks much better
I like your landing page a lot. I hope it converts well for you. Are you going to put in an opt-in box?
Nice and clean but you might want to look into something other than a .info domain. Just a suggestion.
There definitely needs to be a more clear call to action at the bottom of the page. It is really not clear to the user WHERE they need to click. Make a big "Learn More" or "Click Here" button, or something that is obvious to the user that they need to click.
Looks solid. You do need a much stronger call of action as jj407 said. It needs to be really obvious what they need to do and where they need to click. Layout is also solid, but there's a bit too much going on for my taste. Also, adding some urgency will help, especially if the customer is hesitant. Adding something like "they're currently running a special limited discount, which will only last for the next couple of days, so you better act sooner rather than later(hyperlinked) . I paid the full price for it and it was worth every penny, with the discount they're running, it is a no-brainer. Proceed to the website" The headline is decent, you could probably do better, split test several headlines. Something that just came on top of my mind: "Rarely Known DIY Plans To Build Your Own Boat Even If You Have Zero Technical Experience, This Is What The Boating Industry Has Been Desperately Trying to Hide From You" It's not the best example, a bit too over the top and conspiracy-like but you get the idea, so be creative and split test a few more headlines. They're very important, possibly one of the most important segments of a landing page or sales letter.
Hey, that's actually pretty good for a landing page! If I were you I would get rid of one of the "254 Boat Plans" images. The repetition is making it look crowded. And yes as stated before, a better call to action. When I scrolled down, I didn't know where to click!
It will be better if make something more interesting on your landing page title .. and also put your opt in box to create a building list
Not to bad, throw some more buttons in there, change what they say.. make em all different.. Get Started, Learn More, Order Now, etc., etc.
I agree that you need to make it more obvious where to click but I liked how you did the video, I actually like that song but yeah other than that I think it's a great page.