Contest $35 logo contest - Winner gets rights to web header/page design

I need a business logo for:



This is a firearms training group.
Teaching beginners is key, so no tribal art or majorly hard lines.
We would like to have a 2 color vector graphic logo. (red/black?)
It should be unique.
A bullseye would be a starting point but not required. Gun sites, but not a gun would also be an option. Could also be an combination of the three letters as well.
We will know it when we see it, so jump off the deep end if you wish.
No tagline at this point.
Feedback will be posted promptly.

We will pay the winner $35 via PayPal only.
Website design or headers may also be needed in the future. First right of refusal for the winner.
Contest will end in 5 days.

 

I am starting right now.

 

Thanks For the Invite

I'll Enter this one , and give my best.

 

I will enter my design soon

 

my try

 

Here's a concept idea



Feedback Appreciated​

 

one more

 

@masjacky

Nice start! Could you try to put an understated bullseye behind the lady and change out the APT font to something without breaks?

@scorpionagency

I like where you are going, but the sights cannot be off target and that looks too much like blood...

@herdish

Please re-read the requirements. No tribal art. Please give it another go!

ALL GOOD STARTS! Keep it up!

 

D'oh!

 

Revised Concept
More accurate targeting



Feedback appreciated​

 

my revision

 

@Ex3me

We don't care for the enlarged 'T' or the placement of the LLC.. I like the target! Maybe move it to the front left?


@scorpionagency

We really like what you have shown us... Two small revisions would be to have the 'training' portion remain the same height as the 'raining' portion, but make it all caps and make the LLC up instead of down. Nice, this will surely be in the running.

@Chewysmom

We like #3 in particular. Switch the font colors and put the LLC going up like some of the others. Nice work.

@creat3

None of those really hits the mark. We are looking for something that describes precision and they seem a little retro in feel.

@masjacky

Nice job on the revision! We would like to see how it looks with the 'training' portion in caps but same height as 'raining'. Also, we don't care for the way the 'c' in the 'llc' looks cut off. (could be a font issue)


@ALL

We will be following this up immediately with a business card design contest with the new logo. We are excited about what we have seen already!

 

thanks for feedback

 

Revised Concept



Feedback Appreciated​

 

@chewysmom

Nice fix. Thank you.

@scorpionagency

We were looking to keep the font for 'training' the smaller font size as in the size of the lower case 'raining' but uppercase instead there...

 

Revised Concept



Feedback Appreciated​

 

Yes, but the 'T' in training the same size as the rest of the word training... Does that make sense?