Please review this Squeeze Page

Discussion in 'Websites' started by TheInventorySoftware.com, Apr 2, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi, I just finish designing a squeeze page for my Malaysian's friends.
    Could anybody please comment on it.
    Would it bring any lead?

    www.rajakamil.info/beritaharian

    Thank you for your review.
     
  2. sellink2010

    sellink2010 Member

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    #2
    nice page,,,
    maybe this site need more graphic in the header,...
    nice job dude
     
    sellink2010, Apr 2, 2010 IP
  3. TheInventorySoftware.com

    TheInventorySoftware.com Member

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    #3
    Thanks there. Header huh...? hurm.......thinking :D
     
  4. jinmin

    jinmin Active Member

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    I think it can be improved further. The bullet point need to be bigger and use the strong color (eg red color)..other than that, i thinks everything looks good.
     
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    TheInventorySoftware.com Member

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    #5
    You mean, the bullet use strong color or the wording?
     
  6. jinmin

    jinmin Active Member

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    I mean the bullet not the wording...
     
    jinmin, Apr 2, 2010 IP
  7. TheInventorySoftware.com

    TheInventorySoftware.com Member

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    #7
    ic ic, thanks anyway, will update it here when I changed the bullet.
    :)
     
  8. Akhlis

    Akhlis Active Member

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    #8
    Small website but I like the colors.
    You should add some new features, like language selection?
    6/10


    Labici Danut
    neoxarcade.com
     
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    articlewizard123 Peon

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    nice page. do you have translation in English?
     
    articlewizard123, Apr 2, 2010 IP