Hi everyone, I am hoping for a few opinions. We are making mock-up boxes for all of our products (180+) and would like a little feedback and advice before we go ahead and make them all. Here is what we have so far: We would really like your opinion on what you think of the colours, the layout, the text, and the overall design. Ultimately, if you were our affiliate would you use this, or what would you rather see changed (I know there are several on here who do promote us and if you guys especially would like to PM me your commments (so to remain confidential?) then I would really appreciate your time and advice) * I appreciate this could probably be posted in a design area / review area of the DP forums, but I would actually like the opinions of Clickbank affiliates specifically rather than designers. Thanks in advance, Dan
I like it. Nice and clean. It's certainly "good enough", if you know what I mean. One suggestion: perhaps add a CV to the picture to illustrate the fact it's an audio.
Personally I don't like the color combination - green and blue??? You deal in subliminal - I'd use purple and gold, use a dreamy face of a nice girl (not a sexist remark, it definitely helps). As it is - it's a bit boring and it doesn't stand out. I'm in this niche as well (sort of), so keep me posted!
Thanks for the feedback so far! Tiger; you mention that its "good enough", I guess thats how we feel too and why we posted here... that it is "good enough", but maybe could be better? Don't hold back please if you have any further thoughts, I am pretty thick skinned and love to hear if you have any more thoughts / ideas. Oh, but we want to shy away from including a CD image as we don't want people thinking they are buying a CD, we might put a speaker on there perhaps, and we do have the "MP3" label. Dowser; Thanks man, We went with these colours as they match our website branded colours basically - I should of included it, but here is the page where this image will go on our website: http://www.subliminalmp3s.com/win-friends-and-influence-people-subliminal It is going to go above the "Add to Cart" button, basically in the top right of our main page area. Light green / blue sort of matches our website style and definitely our logo colours, we don't want something that would look too out of place.. we were considering red for the middle of the image, but thought it was just too aggressive / loud... Edit: Oh and as for a sexy girl, this has to be a generic template of our box and suitable for all our albums - we have over 180, and I totally agree that a good looking girl would help on some / most, but then again on a lot of the albums she would be out of place / in-appropriate and we just need to keep things standardized and don't want to look for different images for all our different types of albums - just want to keep it simple
are the lines in the background cover because its from a watermark? might want to be careful with that.
yeh it is a watermark from stock photos, but we of course plan to buy the image when we pick one we actually will go with
By "good enough", I mean just that. You're not creating something to be hung in an art gallery, you're creating something to convey the quality of your product in the 1-2 seconds which the user is going to look at it. Which it does very nicely. Actually now I see the page it'll be sitting on, it feels a bit too blue. Maybe you can use the cloud image in the top half, but fade it to white about halfway down. Or maybe just a light grey fade from the top down. Also you could make the main text slightly smaller and include a picture of a speaker or CD on the cover itself rather than a separate object in the image. Anyway.. lots of ideas, ha ha.
I'd still add a strong accent on or next to the box to pick it up. The "buy it now" does it, but will it translate into clicks? With the face - you can find a generic profile )
Thanks for everyones time and feedback, really appreciate it. We have made a couple of small tweaks, and are going to leave it a few days then look with a fresh pair of eyes and get them all made next week. It will sit on this page: http://www.subliminalmp3s.com/win-friends-and-influence-people-subliminal and look like this:
I like the look of that, It brings a more professional look to your site. The product box design in that screenshot is nice and clean and does what tiger says it will, It shows quality the second your eyes roll acrossed it. This kind of tweak should help increase you conversions a fair amount.