Review my Landing Page?

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by Pixel T., Mar 29, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hey guys,

    So I'm back, trying my luck at Affiliate Marketing for the fourth time. After failing the other three times, I decided I will not give up. I am determined to get my first sale.

    Anyways, I bought this domain a while back and never had time to develop it. So I sat down yesterday to think of some landing page ideas. I wanted to make something that is different from all the others. Something that when a person visits the page, doesn't judge it as spam right away.

    I have not put any actual content on it besides placement text.

    The reason I am here right now is to ask you guys if its worth it to give a landing page like this a try. Once the visitor inputs his problem, I will send him an analysis and a recommended product.

    http://www.jh6.org/l4yxzU

    ^^ Shortened URL ^^

    Please let me know what you think of the whole idea while I prepare some of the content.

    Thanks,
     
    Pixel T., Mar 29, 2010 IP
  2. Jasonb

    Jasonb Well-Known Member

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    thats hot! nice and smooth, its simple but it works, like it! good luck with everything
     
    Jasonb, Mar 29, 2010 IP
  3. Pixel T.

    Pixel T. Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. Hopefully, it will work :)
     
    Pixel T., Mar 29, 2010 IP
  4. lspublish1

    lspublish1 Peon

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    #4
    It's organized and professional, but i would consider personalizing it more - give a name, contact, about us...something to make it less anonymous.
     
    lspublish1, Apr 1, 2010 IP
  5. Dan Bainbridge

    Dan Bainbridge Active Member

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    Pretty interesting, I think you could have a decent angle on this. Certainly different to most.

    I was actually going to say "why reinvent the wheel" - i.e. why try something new when you can just look to see what is working for other top affiliates and base your site on that (but add your own improvements / twist), but I think this idea could really help, definitely a nice touch.

    You haven't failed 3 times, you have learnt things which you won't do again. If that was the case then I have failed thousands of times, but I see it more as being successful thousands of times, and I think if you change your perspective you might enjoy it more, stay motivated, and keep persisting.

    Good luck, really like the page :)
    Dan
     
    Dan Bainbridge, Apr 1, 2010 IP
  6. erase

    erase Member

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    When first visiting your site I didn't knwo what this yellow light is all about.
    Only after reading some of the content I figured out it is about the PS3.
    You might want to make this more clear.
     
    erase, Apr 2, 2010 IP
  7. Pixel T.

    Pixel T. Well-Known Member

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    I'm only going to be targeting PS3 users with a defected PS3 so they will know what its about.

    Plus an update. All the main page content just came in. Will be getting the main domain up and running right after I finished the Quick Fix Center.
     
    Pixel T., Apr 2, 2010 IP
  8. SiL^Er_HunTeR

    SiL^Er_HunTeR Guest

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    Lookin good, looks like a winner
     
    SiL^Er_HunTeR, Apr 2, 2010 IP
  9. Robert25

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    I appreciate your courage and the attitude to stood up again after falling. But I doubt with this landing page you will see sales.
    I will recommend you following things, which are proven in affiliate industry and got good results who ever apply it.

    1) Make it as relevant as you can. e.g. create a page specific to yellow light of death error.
    2) Add a product image and add 4 to 5 stars under the product image.
    3) Write a review about a product as you had used it.
    4) Give strong call to action.
    5) Spread you affiliate link in the content atleast 3-4 times.
    6) Drive targeted traffic.
    7) E.g.game-copy-softwares.info
    8) Repeat the whole process for "Green Blinking Light" and other error codes.

    Hope this help..
     
    Robert25, Apr 3, 2010 IP