Please review Squeeze Page

Please review the following squeeze page.

http://lt4.pyxismteamone.com/

I would be interested in hearing about the design and content.

 

It looks just like every other MLM site out there - not exciting. On the plus side, congrats about not trying to mask what it is.

You are missing the standard pic of some dude standing next to an expensive car.

 

Thanks for the feedback. What suggestion can you make for the site to look a little more exciting?

The squeeze page design was intended to have an honest professional look. Even the testimonials were freely submitted to me by some members on my team. I had no intention of showing cars, boats or pots of gold. This is a serious opportunity for serious and patient individuals.

The squeeze page will send autoresponder messages describing my team build site at http://www.PyxismTeamOne.com

I would be interested in hearing any other suggestions on the squeeze page.

 

Your matching header and footer are unique. I liked that.

 

quite nice but maybe a bit plain and boring

 

Nice design. I think it's better to reduce the bullet tick mark size a little bit.

 

My personal rule of web surfing is "If a web page starts making noise at me automatically, leave immediately!"

I'm usually listening to some music in the background, or sometimes have my headphones on and turned up. If I get to a site and some scammy guy comes blasting in my ears about pyramid schemes, you can bet I'm not sticking around long enough to put in my email address.

You'd irritate less people and get a better conversion rate just by adding a 'Play' button to the video and letting people choose to push it instead of blowing out their ear drums without any say in the matter.

 

Very nice after i view it, but i think you can make it more better

 

very good design and layout