First real article or blog post i wrote - review please

Ok, so i run a website management site and I hardly ever write my own content, I'm a computer science major, I wanted to see what you guys thought about my explanation of my business and to see if i wrote the article well or not.

English is my second language

http://markspixel.com/2010/02/23/what-is-website-management-and-who-needs-it/

 

i recommed that you change the font color to something that stands out. the current font is too similar to the background which makes it hard to read.

the article is good, but you could add some graphics related to each heading to promote a feeling of professionalism on your site.

 

Thanks for the tip, how does the text color look now?

 

yes design is good but you should to put some graphics i.e photo in design and if you can reduce the left menu section and increase body part then it will better looks...

thanks

 

I would make your sentences shorter. The topic is not the most interesting so you want to make it as easy to read as possible.

For this I would also use more line breaks. Not more than 3-4 lines before a break.

 

stinging my eyes when I read an article on the website is yours for several minutes. may I suggest .. you should replace the color that is not too bright

 

The contents are very informative and the design looks good but need to add more attractive color schemes that will impress visitors more..

 

I would suggest you just make it black on white. Some of the most successful blogs have black text on white background. If that seems too boring, I think dark blue captions look really good.

 

really like design, basic and nice

 

Ok, thanks for all the tips - still making more changes

Please tell me if the text and overall layout looks better now?

 

I like it, but I think that black text would would make it easier to read. I felt like I had to strain my eyes a bit too much.

 

I have already changed it to black, please look again