Please review http://2mob.net Please comment on: 1) Layout, colors 2) 5 seconds understanding, do you know what the site does by looking at it for just 5-8 seconds ? 3) SEO, meta tags, keywords (home page only), title, images... 4) Usability, navigation 5) General impression What would you change if you were designing it? We need a critical view of the site!!! So be blunt!
well here you go 1. Nice colors, OK layout, but NO design 2. Actually the only thing I understood was this "City cheapest gas prices on a cell phone" 3. your title looks like keyword tag, have you mixed them up, if you check out google, they don't show such long titles, have it in 2 - 5 words the most 4. make a design and have your major links to be visible better. I hardly found your links 5. Needs design development Surely I'd change its design not layout but design, have some more graphics there Hope this helps
Thanks. That is the kind of input we are looking for... If I understood it correctly: - menu and links not clear or visible - more graphics to accentuate the above Was it clear what we do and sell by just looking at the page for 5-8 seconds? Yes or No? Thanks.
2mob.net, Yes, i spent less than 6 secs to figure out wat the website was mainly about... Great job on the brief and concise description next to the large cell phone image. Don't think u really need to put too much effort on making more graphics for the website as i think that will distract surfers focus on what u selling. At this point, i think better keep it simple and neat in order to meet ur target! About the title as suggested by lugwig, its kind of long. try to make it brief too... I gave 8/10 for ur overall impression. U're on the right track for conveying ur website idea!
Thanks carmaniac. Most surfers don't spend more than 10 seconds on any given website, unless they are interested in the concept or content of the site. ("Don't make me think" guy will probably disagree here So the menu was ok? The animation on the banner wasn't a distraction for you? Our goal was for visitors to "get the idea" in 10 secs or less, do the zig-zag: logo, phone image, title, main points, maybe the right column, then "Start Here". Anybody else? We need more feedback, positive or negative...
If I understood it correctly: - menu and links not clear or visible YES - more graphics to accentuate the above YES Was it clear what we do and sell by just looking at the page for 5-8 seconds? Yes or No? Not So much unless I read the specified line of text
Thanks Ludwig. If it wasn't clear to you, it won't be for other people as well. We appreciate your feedback. Thanks again.
you are always welcome, that's why we are here, for suggesting, and not just suggesting, but bringing up our own points of view, then you decide whether to accept them or not
Ur welcome! Nope the menu and banner is fine, not too complicated... neat and simple as i said earlier! All the best to ur website!