Hey i need advice on improving my website

I have about 10 articles so far

 

Looks ok to me. Needs traffic and more traffic! Submit it to several directories to build some PR.

 

thats what ive been doing just gota wait for s.e's to find it i supppose

 

you could add some succes storyes and something like that but dont overflow the page

 

yeah write more and build more pages lol

 

looks great. More newsy and add in some video.

 

do niche article submissions ...

 

write articles related to your website and submit it in ezine it definitely brings traffic.............

 

So what the majority of you are saying the designs fine, just aim to get targeted traffic yeh?

 

Ive been doing articles done 10 so far anyone direct me to a good list of sites to submit them tho? i have submited to some alredy

 

i think your site is nice.... developed on.... hope success..okay

 

Thanks for the comments gives me a big of a boost to battle on to crack affiliate marketing

 

Nice sales page, I was shocked about this could make by spending only $200. Search in google on what keywords the customers are searching, make a blog in that keyword, promote it via social book marking, you can make a decent sales every month.You don't miss this, because you have a good killer sales pitch. Good job.

 

Im alredy working on the blog side of things i www.cleanenergysource.net/blog
I have 10 more post schedualed aswell keeping it upto date and fresh content

I just need to make sale now i think

 

i like the theme and the topic you are choosing

 

Just thaught id inform you its made its first sale thanks for the advice everyone, more sales to come i hope

 

The site is a sales page site, so it should be perform as sales page. And your site do that!
But sales page need user/buyer testimonials, where are they?

 

Hey Calippo,

I quite like it - I think the design is really nice - professional, clean, and modern,

Overall I think you are doing a little too much - this looks more like a sales page than a landing page / review page to me, and to be honest, its not the best sales page in terms of copy.

Straight away when scrolling down there are several BIG chunks of text and this just makes me groan a bit, it should be bulleted, broken up, highlighted.... SHORTER...

I think the page would work on some level and bring you sales, but imo you are doing too much - cut the text right down, and PRE-sell rather than do the hard sell -imo an affiliate's job is to generate interest, feed a few benefits and send slightly warm traffic to the vendor page - if your site is too boring or too much info it can distract them from clicking through and getting your cookie.

Keep it simple - good luck!