Hello all, I am about to start a Google ad campaing and I created a landing page: http://www.s-development.net/online-booking-system/ I would like to know what do you think about it. Thank you all!
The layout of the site is ok, but I think you need to rethink that logo tho. Just looks out of place.
The layout is ok. However I'd quite like to be able to see that exel type image on there. After all that's part of what you're selling isn't it? and all I can see is a very small image and hardly any detail. Could you make it so it gets larger when someone clicks it, a kind of zoom feature.
agree.. why you display s- and development on two lines? you need to place them in one line.. other than that.. this page looks fine.. simple and to the point
It is simple and neat, I couldnt find anything wrong with this web page. I even like the fact that you have placed the "S-" and the remainder name in two lines (may be it came by default from the graphics software).
hi buddy what did you make this landingpage with ? because I'm going to make a proper landingpage for promoting product clickbank thanks
In my experience, using a template that doesn't relate to your product can really hurt sales. Try using a different template, or look into having create a custom landing page for you. It's relatively cheap, and can really make a difference. I would go with something a little more tech-orientated. It looks like you're selling lawn care products on this website.
The layout is good and neat. However, I think it would catch more the attention of your visitors if you have a header pic or change the logo, something more professional looking. Or better improve the logo graphics.
i agree the excel image needs to be more clearer and the opt in form could do with being a bit more fancy
I would change some text format into bold to explorer some importanty or attract attention. I personally would make the header with the logo and menu more smaler.
easy to the eye, the very design of your page. however you could reconsider the text content to give a more detailed idea of what the site is all about.
I know the forum posts have agreed that it's a decent landing page, but in my opinion, you should really go for a more professional tech-savvy look. If you're selling something that involving design and code work, your site should look the part. If you need help, or any ideas feel free to send me a PM.
I'll have to agree with the majority. You need a new logo, a template, and an image of your product. In addition your will need to add a Privacy page since you are doing a PPC and you have an opt-in box. Also, you need to correct your grammar. The very first sentence is no good as well as your last couple.
You may want to hire someone to edit it, or run through it yourself and catch all of the little mistakes. Proper grammar is one of the most important aspects of good copy. Also your design is nice, but does it really direct your visitors on what to do? It is sort of freely open and out there. There is no direction.
thank you very much for all your remarks. You have no idea how helpful they are! 1) Logo - this is from the old design and in all the company papers. I agree that it looks bad there. I will have to find a solution. 2) The idea is to market this product to people who are not tech-savvy like hair dressers, dentists etc... that's why I chose soft design 3) The text - English is not my mother tongue so I need to find an editor who can go through the text. Do you know someone? 4) Thanks for the remark about the privacy policy. I have added it. 5) I made the image clickable so there is larger image
I am assuming you want people to subscribe thru the opt-in form. The way it's set up now there is no incentive for someone to sign up. Offer a related free report as a bonus for them signing up to your blog.
I think the landing page is good from every point of view, be it designing or content or simplicity. Nice work!!