Please Review My New Make Money $7 Secrets Site..

Hy friend,,

Please review my squeeze page, I'm launching my 1st small business money making site alone. please tell me what all should I do about it..

http://www.quick-recession-buster.info

Thanks before
Erdy Yudanto

 

first change the look of your website.
put more of content

 

Concerned with content and content, and content
Content is King

 

Hate those anoying prompts when you try to leave.

 

Hi mate! I would put a background and i dont like when I have to click many times before being able to close the site... one time is enough, dont put too many popup windows! Good Luck!

 

Hey friend,
you should add more attractive description...
and should not lots pop up...

Thanks!

 

same here. gets on my nerves!!!

 

Content is weak on site, but name is attractive.

 

It looks a bit simple, do some more hard work and you will be a sucessful webmaster

 

I understand what you have done with the landing page.

I think its well designed but I think you need to be a little more descriptive as to what people are signing up for.

One paragraph near the top would be enough.

Apart from that, I am sure you know that the only way your site will be found with that landing page is from advertising ie adwords or offering an affiliate programme.

Good luck

 

Too stout and easy in comparison to guess that the site and purpose, so no one would join your program

 

nice and simple..but you should change the layout..it will be more helpful..

 

The template and layout is not very impressive and need a good description about your site that will help visitors a lot..

 

Your first site cannot be a money-making site... you don't know HOW TO MAKE MONEY YET!!

In general, the site looks like a scam to me. All the bold type and capital letters would scare me off.

As usual, check grammar and spelling.

 

I think you need more content - as in quality content. Give your audience more proof.

 

nothing comes from nothing!

you must work for real money, my friend!

 

it looks fine to me.

 

You should add some testimonials to make it look more legitimate, and generally lengthen the page. I read somewhere that despite how we all find the longer ones annoying, they do actually boost sales.