Review my sales page

Hello,

Please review my sales page, I'm launching my 1st product with my friend. please tell me what all should I do about it..

Check it here

 

The contents are interesting and new to me and template looks simple and bit old.It was fast in loading.

 

Good presentation and organization. I like.

 

can you give more detailed about your product in your sales letter and you must more picture inside it to make it more attractive..

 

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Hi Karan.Iabra,

Well you are straight forward and honest in your presentation. There were no clickable links in the sales page. Here is something you might want to consider. I'm seeing a trend in presenting new web pages. That is the subject line. Reading "No Credit Card Required" they let them use the system for 30 days and if there interested they'll purchase. Make the bonuse available after there 30 day trial or ad a couple more after a paid membership.

 

Elegant and simple...Great

 

hmz... something missing .. maybe too simple

 

What is missing?

 

Very interesting information you have here. I think its decent and gets straight to the point.

 

Speaking about the wepbage as whole, it is simple and well-designed. However, the header at the background could be improved a bit.

 

Thanks for the suggestions Would love to have more coming

 

Here's some suggestions:

- Add images. (Proof of payment / cheques / etc)
- Teaser content. Perhaps a (video) of what's inside.
- Privacy policy
- Not a fan of all the font size changes. It's ok for headers but not for the text. Do just 1 effect, either bolden, or change the bg color, or change the font size but do not combine these.
- The tagline(s) at the top basically say the same thing twice. Not a very good use of the space: "Make Money On Autopilot While You Are Sleeping" versus " Sleeping, On Autopilot With Just An Hour Of Setup Time".
- Get a proper logo.
- Add "boxes". Simply change the bg color and add a border around important sections. This could be good for your lists you have as they are now not left aligned and kind of strange looking at that position.
- Add a twitter account for social proof and so people can contact you with questions. About us page or contact us page would also be good.

 

Very catchy~ When it gets all up and running, PM me. I want this!!!

 

I Suggest putting the price at your main page and not the ejunkie page.

 

Added the price on main page + Added Logo

 

nothing bad. attractive fonts, good design but this is a classic design for sales site

 

make the text clear. I am difficult to read it.

 

Done Done done

Thanks