$30 for t-shirt design for moving company

I need a design for a t-shirt for a moving company.

One idea is to have an illustration of profile of a truck, and the owner of the company leaning against it. I'd prefer the style of this illlustration to be simple and "artistic".

For guidance, attached is an EXTREMELY general idea of what I mean. I provide this purely for general layout purposes -- don't rely on it for anything artistic please!

Please DO incorporate the name provided in the image though.

I've also attached a better image of the owner. Certainly the illustration doesn't have to represent him in detail though. But please do include his large chin goatee -- that's kind of his "trademark" apparently.

I've also included an image of his type of truck for a little more guidance.

But you can also feel free to submit a design that has nothing at all to do with what I've provided. I am not at all committed to this idea and would like to see others.

thanks!

 

my entry :

 

My entry:

 

my try

feedback appreciated

 

my entry


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Here is my idea. Feedback thanks!

 

my try...

 

This is my try.its kinda funny actually



feedback would be appreciated

 

Thanks for your entries everyone. I need to discuss this w the owner. Will respond w feedback in 12 hours or so.

 

Hi, I may be interested in purchasing both the design by yoihenba_k and by plazmaDesign.

yoihenba_k,
1.could you modify the owner's clothes a bit? Make the shorts a bit shorter, and black. And make the shirt look more like the shirt at this link: http://www.clothing4all.com/images/8800_Maroon_Model_Front1.jpg

2. also, there are a few imperfections with the truck -- jagged lines, etc. could you correct those?

plazmaDesign -- 1. right now the outline of the truck has a blurry effect -- i think i'd prefer it look sharper, and shinier, like the letters in Bookstore Movers

2. Also the books on the truck look a bit pixelated -- could you correct that?

thank you all.

 

another try,
@mukhlis92, don't take the head I made again!!

 

Thanks for feedback working on it i will post soon

 

modification done..
sent u pm..
thnx

 

here is modification thanks!

 

Hi Plazmadesign, just a couple more things -- I promise no more changes besides these:

1. I liked how the books were uneven before -- I just didn't like the pixelation that was going on (the jagged lines).
2. Rather than a curve above the O letters in Bookstore. Could you actually change the O letters to look like tires?

thanks.

 

Ask anything you want.I can change or add anything you like.Fell free It's your contest..
Anyway thanks for feedback i will post soon new version.

 

What about that? What you think?

 

Any feedback here?

 

Hi, I'm sorry for the delayed response:

1. The books are nice and sharp now, thanks. My only critique of them now is that the pages look too grey -- can you make the page edges look whiter?

2. The "O"s just look like thicker "O"s now really. Could you add a couple more truck tire characteristics? Perhaps you could use this illustration as a guide:
http://thumb7.shutterstock.com.edge...rtoon-trucks-see-in-my-portfolio-31753201.jpg

Certainly it can remain simple -- not great detail. But I just want them to look a bit more like tires.

thank you.

 

Thanks for feedback i will post in few hours