$85 Simple Design Contest (Newsletter Sign up Box - Everything Provided)

Okay guys – here’s some Feedback.

Before I do I would like to thank all of the designers so far for submitting superb designs – I’m incredibly impressed - Everyone told me to go to 99 Designs – but I knew Digitalpoint was the place to go 

Now this is a note to ALL designers: I was thinking that the visual coloring/background should be a nice shade of green. Like a forest green. I have always found that green works really well in marketing materials -- especially with energy issues. Green is a subliminal color for energy, environment -- and money -- and it is a color that is easy on the eyes. Creatively and scientifically, red is an automatic "no" for marketing materials. Blue is almost the same.
This is just an idea though – so Green isn’t essential – it would just be nice to see.

Also Please could everyone enter the box: Click here to learn more

A good place to have this could be after the sign up now – or maybe not.
If you are struggling to fit everything is – please do remove: And receive unique news and intelligence in your mailbox every day. (as this is the weakest part of the text)

So it could be:

And....it's FREE!

Sign Up now or Click here to learn more.

Name:
e-mail:

Back to FEEDBACK:

Biruhato – I like it – very neat and professional – it stands out well and displays all of the information, without making it look pinched.
I would like to see a part – where there is a Click here to learn more. If you take a look at moneyandmarkets.com you’ll see what I mean.
Also – the small envelopes by the sign in box aren’t working for me. Still it’s an great first entry.

Stellah57 – I like the clarity of the design – all of the benefits stand out well – but it’s just not doing it for me – it could be the colour – which is a bit too bold.

Jnjnnino – Wow – that is different – but I like it. There are a few things I’m not keen on though are the bullet points – they seem to get lost – and they are the main sales point.
Also the blue is quite strong and when marketing it’s a bit of a put off – I was thinking of visual colouring/background to be a nice shade of green – Forest Green.

Mukhlis92 – Great spacing – it really helps all of the material to stand out very well. I like the ticks and the use of green. I’m not keen on the top part though – it’s just not right for the audience.

Renderwork – Nice design – professional and classy looking – I’m not that keen on the red though – is it possible to try other colours – like the green I mentioned above?
It also looks a little squeezed.
At the bottom where it has Sign up now – could you please remove (And receive unique news and intelligence in your mailbox every day) and put: Or Click here to learn more – the click here to learn more will need to be like on moneyandmarkets.com Still it’s a great first entry.

Xiaeron – I like the envelope and the colouring is quite neutral – but I’m afraid it just doesn’t work for me.

Minucosminu – I like it – well structured and the spacing is good. I’m not too sure on the black and red though – is it possible you can try other colours.

Nayirpro – This is an interesting design – at first I didn’t like it – but I like the way you have given the letters a sheen. As that shiny look is very nice. Structurally though – it’s not what I’m after.

Universal 4o – it’s an interesting and different slant on things – but I’m afraid it just won’t work for the audience.

TindiRindi – Quite an interesting design – it does look a bit squeezed though and the bullet points need to stand out more. Is it possible to see in other colours?

Thanks to all of the entrants so far – I look forward to seeing your revisions and some new designs.

 

the green button is an animated one which will show click here on the other frame. feedback appreciated

 

Now?

 

my entry

 

will do change tomorow, i left the files on my office. hope you willing to wait for it.

 

Here's my entry!
Some feedback would be greatly appreciated!

 

hi staffjam,

thanks for the feedback, here's some shade of forest green and add click here element as well.

previews:

http://unlock-all-motorola.com/css/css/oilcprice/newsletter-green.jpg

shrink to your site

http://unlock-all-motorola.com/css/css/oilcprice/oil-newsletter-shrink-green.jpg

feedback is still very much appreciated.

regards,
jr

 

my next entry... any feedback are highly appreciated

 

wait for me ...

 

Here is my entry

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2578/newstellercopy.png


http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/8508/newsteller2copy.png

Please leave a feedback and thanks for the invite
If you like it I can put it for peview on the website!

 

3th try

Governments have the fonts and added a few leaves of "Sing Up" button
Please leave a feedback.

 

here is my try....

feedback will be nice..

 

green colors used
I think centered text makes the text more readable and it's easier on the eyes. looks less busy.



and some minor changes

 

Okay guys – here is some more feedback:

Raman Gulia – It’s quite an interesting design and I like the top right corner – but I’m afraid it’s not what I’m looking for.

Universal4o – Thanks for making changes – it really doesn’t fit with the site though – sorry but it won’t work. (both designs)

Chewysmom – It’s clean/neat & Fresh – but it’s just not dynamic enough – it all blends together and there is no call to action in the design. (this applies to the second design as well)

Robi – Now this is an interesting design – at first I didn’t like it – but every time I look at it something new (I like) pops out. The problem is it’s a bit too long and the orange colour is a bit weak. It also seems a bit disjointed – like it’s 3 adverts
I like the subscribe box – with the we respect your privacy – Very nice and just the sort of thing I’m after. Please also remove the bit under the Learn more Box as it really isn’t necessary on this design.
So I like it – but it just needs some amendments.

Jnjnnino – Thanks for making changes – sadly the green is just too overpowering (it was my fault) – Still it has great spacing – it looks Very professional – but it’s just missing a few things and sadly at this stage I can’t put mu finger on what it is.

Stellah57 – Thanks for making the changes – it’s a nice clean look and design – but it just doesn’t make the top 3.

Bodil4o – Thanks for the entry – it’s just a bit too plain to work though.

Midsen – Professional clean look – but I hate to say it it just looks a bit boring and doesn’t stand out or call to action.

TindiRindi – This is interesting. But it is all a bit too compact – the separate sections aren’t obvious and it just looks like one big bit of text. Maybe break it up a bit – also I’m not too sure on that shade of green.

Minucosminu – That looks good – professional design – not sure about the font though. It’s missing something and I can’t put my finger on it. It would be nice to see some other colours tried.

Thankyou everyone for your entries and revisions. I’ll give the top 3 designs in the next few hours.
Until then please keep on submitting your designs – the quality here is superb.

 

some more changes,

http://unlock-all-motorola.com/css/css/oilcprice/newsletter-green-2.jpg

http://unlock-all-motorola.com/css/css/oilcprice/newsletter-green-shrink-2.jpg

let me know what you think..

regards,
Jr

 

wait for my revision