Selling $50 Logo Contest - For Gifts for Men Website

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  1. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #21
    Client Comments: This design is missing the S from gifts. I'm not sure I like the idea of the #4 being in a circle, I don't think it fits well with the rest of the site design.

    Client Comments: Some great designs, and I think that 5 + 6 are the best ones of your variations, as the square blocks behind the man symbol are a little confusing. I think the fonts are a little weak, perhaps trying a bolder (more manly!) font?


    Client Comments: The font looks great, it matches the brief of being cartoony. I would prefer for the character to look more like the example image provided however.

    Also, the little bag with the $ on it looks feminine, as it looks like a handbag. The $ symbol is also confusing. Perhaps make this more obviously a gift?



    Thanks everyone!
     
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  2. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #22
    Client Comments: The logo is very confusing. The text is really broken up, which means it's hard to read. The little man looks very odd, and doesn't represent the website.

    Nice choice of font for Gifts, and the blue behind the little man is a good choice of blue.
     
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  3. HerDish

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    #23
    thanks for feedback

    heres another revision

    feedback very appreciated

    thank you

    [​IMG]
     
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  4. MantisArt

    MantisArt Well-Known Member

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    #24
    thanks for the feedback, here's my revised entry

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  5. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #25
    Client Comments: I like the middle design best of those 3, however, the font is still very formal. The text style should be a lot more fun, something like below:


    Dan
     
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  6. HerDish

    HerDish Peon

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    #26
    another idea

    feedback very appreciated

    [​IMG]

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  7. minucosminu

    minucosminu Active Member

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    #27
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  8. HerDish

    HerDish Peon

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    #28
    i think you want it more man.. for your last feedback to me

    this is another idea

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  9. masjacky

    masjacky Peon

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    #29
    my try...

    [​IMG]
     
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  10. renderwork

    renderwork Well-Known Member

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    #30
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  11. jokomamamita

    jokomamamita Well-Known Member

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    #31
    Thanks for your feedback. My revision:

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  12. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #32
    Client Comments: this is showing an improvement, but the font still isn't in the right style. Could the man, gift and box behind the #4 be blue, yet the text be grey.

    Client Comments: this is an improvement, the character looks much better outside the lettering

    Client Comments: The logo feels very sparse, and doesn't seem to mesh very well.
     
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  13. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Client Comments: I'm not a big fan of the font being used, however the gift looks quite nice. The character isn't exactly what was asked for, but it's not bad. It looks like a generic character rather than specifically being manly.

    Client Comments: the ideas presented are excellent! Although the character isn't exactly what was requested, it matches the feel that is being aimed for. The little man and the present do look very good.

    I don't think that the rounded edges/dark background of the logo will fit the design. Perhaps try using a white lettering with a grey outline?

    Client Comments: This is getting closer to the desired result. The style of your font has a great look. However, the current man/circle looks as if the man is being given as a gift! Could you make it look as if the man is receiving a wrapped gift?

    Thanks!
     
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  14. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #34
    Any answer on my scalable PSD question? Thanks
     
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  15. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Yep, EPS is definitely required please.

    Thanks
     
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    Lipgut Member

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    #36
    The "s" can be added simply. Uncomfortably I am to busy to modify it at this time. If you are interested in purchasing my design I will surely add the "s".
     
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  17. xxxplatinium

    xxxplatinium Active Member

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    #37
    Here's mine:
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    Hope you like it.
     
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  18. mukhlis92

    mukhlis92 Peon

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    #38
    This is my revision

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    ermm....can i have feedback for these too?
     
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  19. HerDish

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    #39
    another try

    [​IMG]
     
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    #40
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