Contest Poker Ebook Sales Page. $50.

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  1. dherald

    dherald Active Member

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    #21
    Was able to see it only in another browser, odd.

    Like this one. Can you work on the "blood money" that's there right now? It spoils the elegant feeling.

    Also, what would a footer look like?
     
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    dherald Active Member

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    #22
    I honestly don't know.

    It just doesn't look elegant as a whole. Maybe it's just me. As if the style isn't defined.
     
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  3. photoshoppie

    photoshoppie Peon

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    #23
    Do you like the colours?
     
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    dherald Active Member

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    #24
    Yes I like the colors and love the eye. It gives a mesmerizing effect. However, it just doesn't look elegant as a whole.
     
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    photoshoppie Peon

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    #25
    working on it will submit soon..........
     
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  6. BishopStill

    BishopStill Well-Known Member

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    #26
    What exactly do you mean by "work" on them? Do you want me to remove them, or what? Please explain. I will work on the footer also.
     
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    dherald Active Member

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    #27
    The current cash picture to the right looks as if it has blood stains. Can you make it look nice?
     
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    BishopStill Well-Known Member

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    #28
    Ofcourse. I'll work my magic. :D
     
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    photoshoppie Peon

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    #29
    [​IMG]



    please give some feedback.
     
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    BishopStill Well-Known Member

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    #30
    OK. Here's my revised version as you requested. Please let me know if anything else is needed.

    [​IMG]

    If that link doesn't work, try this direct link: http://i45.tinypic.com/2qclchf.jpg

    Please let me know what you think.
    Bishop

    PS. Here is 12 PM so if i don't answer in 15 minutes max, it means i'm sleeping with my head on the keyboard, lol.
     
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  11. dherald

    dherald Active Member

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    #31
    Ok, great entries from the both of you today.

    I will let this thread run for another day, if nobody else enters, will have to choose one of you :)

    Good work guys, good night for now.
     
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  12. Jerlene.net

    Jerlene.net Prominent Member

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    #32
    Can I get some feedback?
     
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    photoshoppie Peon

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    #33
    a bit of changes in colour:)

    [​IMG]

    feedback appreciated
     
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    #34
    Without the white background on the sales letter it just doesn't look good. I am not a designer, but it just doesn't have any sense of style.
     
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    #35
    Yours has the same problem, no style.
     
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    #36
    Contest over, awarded BishopStill.

    Thanks everyone!
     
    dherald, Jan 4, 2010 IP