Technoguy: #17 they both look really good and so far they are the favourites Nidhi, thanks for the new try at #18 but the letters are not bold enough for my liking #21 looks better but it's just a touch plain. I know I said I want simple and clean and I still want simple and clean, but I think yours is a little plain. Maybe the font is a touch too common and maybe you need to add just one small thing to make it not look plain. Gladiatus: thanks for the entry and while it's creative it is not suitable because I need Free T-shirt and Free Shaker to stand out a lot more and to be made using bold letters. Also, I am based in Australia and a frosty theme is not suitable here because summer has just started. Dede: #20 looks a lot better. Definitely an improvement. EDIT: I am going in bed now (nearly midnight in Australia) but I will be back once I wake up. So far the one to beat is the one done by technoguy.
Just woke up and need to go to the gym. Protein alone will not help you get muscle. You also need to train. Thanks for the new entries and I will be back in a few hours with the feedback. So far technoguy is still in the lead. Kie has a nice entry but needs bolder fonts and the white at the bottom and top needs to be reduced. Also maremart looks good but it would look even better with a cleaner edge/border and without the black shadow effect. Hemp's one is very creative but not at all suitable because the words don't stand out enough. Sorry but I am running out of time and will be back later with more feedback.
Hi, Thanks for the feedback Here is my revision http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1259787875 How is it? Feedback appreciated, I need to go to sleep now, if you have things need to change, I will change it tomorrow, thanks
Thanks for all the entries guys. It's unanimous this time: the winner is onlyfights. Please pm me for payment. I will also be awarding $5 for second place and that goes to technoguy. I am a little pressed for time but I will come back with feedback for all those whose entries I missed.