Please Review My Unique Website!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by sheriffonline, Nov 1, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I have created new unique website for Free Traffic for Websites.

    I appreciate your feedback and comments.

    URL: http://overvisited.com

    To Your Success
    Sheriff
     
    sheriffonline, Nov 1, 2009 IP
  2. merlinseo

    merlinseo Well-Known Member

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    Hi,
    Below are my comments :-

    1.) I entered a URL (fake one) , first i entered without .com and it didnt accept - CORRECT BEHAVIOUR
    Next time I entered complete URL with .com and it accepted without EMAIL - NOT SURE IF ITS CORRECT
    I hope you will need email also as mandatory field but right now its accepting the URL if email is empty. Please check

    2.) I see that Meta tags are missing, Most important ones (Keyword and description)

    3.) Your title tag says only one word : Lottery, Can be more descriptive TITLE with 5 to 8 words and effectively also have keywords added

    Thanks and Regards,
    Merlin
     
    merlinseo, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  3. organicCyborg

    organicCyborg Peon

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    #3
    The design could use work in the "todays winner" section and the form.

    Maybe add a description of the winning website under the url?
     
    organicCyborg, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  4. koba

    koba Peon

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    Hi,

    1. I can't see who is today's winner. Yellow block shows only 'Today's winning web page' label and 'Report' link.

    2. Click on 'Report' link shows popup with the only one message - 'Reported successfully'. Difficult to define why do I need this 'Report' link.

    3. How could I see all competitors in lottery?

    4. URL submitted page could be better. I recommend just to transfer user to index page with 'success' message in body.
     
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  5. sheriffonline

    sheriffonline Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Thanks for your time to review my site.

    Ans: I will...

    Thanks for your time to review my site.
     
    sheriffonline, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  6. netventures

    netventures Peon

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    #6
    I'm not sure why you need the "current time" placed right in the middle of the page. That is the first thing my eye is drawn to and it is not relevant for the user. Overall, I think you need to do a better job of simplifying the page. Look at Google's home page: they just have a search form and that's it. You are not hit with the ads or any other info until you have entered a search query. Your page should be similar: put the url and email boxes front and center (and larger) with just a bit of text describing the benefits to using your service. The simpler you make it, the more people will enter their url.
     
    netventures, Nov 6, 2009 IP
  7. ckshaver

    ckshaver Peon

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    I'm a newbie, so I'm sure thats why, but I don't get the site. What is the point of traffic with no context? A raffle for lots of visitors...what it the point. Not quite sure who your target is, but don't get the 'selling proposition'.
     
    ckshaver, Nov 7, 2009 IP
  8. Trandanos

    Trandanos Peon

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    Could do with a bit more content. I wasn't sure what the website was about when I first arrived. Certainly seems like it has potential to be very good though.
     
    Trandanos, Nov 8, 2009 IP
  9. mayanks

    mayanks Member

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    #9
    i dint understand the concept of this site..pls explain a bit
     
    mayanks, Nov 8, 2009 IP
  10. sheriffonline

    sheriffonline Well-Known Member

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    Hi,

    Submit your url freely. if you submit email you will get the winning page on your mail. it is optional. every day you can submit your url. once you sumitted you will need to see today's winning page. your page will be placed for next lottery draw. if your page wins in random lottery draw. next day all url submitters will visit your page.

    becoming vip member you don't need to re submit the url again and again. your url will be participated everyday automatically.
     
    sheriffonline, Nov 8, 2009 IP
  11. mayanks

    mayanks Member

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    yo thats a very nice thing... i will be your daily visitor :D until i get some funds to buy VIP :D
     
    mayanks, Nov 8, 2009 IP