Review my Squidoo lens please

Hi friends, i have created my first commercial squidoo lens to start my affiliate marketing. The niche is memory card.
Can you please tell all the possible ways to make it more excellent one to stand out ? so that i will get some referal commissions!
Selecting Right Memory Card for Nikon Digital Camera
In short please tell me all the good things i had done and the mistakes i did from the affiliate, traffic , conversion and seo point of view.
Thanks a lot.

 

Hello any one please !

 

Hello simply-seo,

I see your post titles and content are well written and concise along with relevant pictures when necessary, it was pleasant for me reading them. The amazon-affiliate links are well placed too though I would place them at the post-bottom too.

Now, seeing the squidoo on the top left of the page give me creeps because plenty of other websites are working hard on their own domain names, cool wordpress themes, plugins, etc.

I think you have done excellent "if" you are only testing/curious all of this. "No! I'm serious about this" you may say, in which case I would recommend:

Get out of squidoo, buy your own domain (cheap, ~$9/year on godaddy) and get a cheap but reliable hosting that is capable of supporting your blog engine of your preference.

Let me know what's the bigger plan you have on all of this, If I can see like you see I can provide better feedback.

Keep up the good work

 

Hi Bulkish,
Thanks very much for your postive feedback, actually i have domains and hosting and even also have a shopping site with blog for which i have written many posts. But i have tiered of being marketing the posts in my own site. So that i made a squidoo lens on the belief that squdioo lens are easy to market and rank well amoing SE's. I desperately in need of earning from Affiliate but i didnt make it still
What shall i do now ? Create a link wheel for every long tail keyword that im targetting ?

Like if i target this current long tail phrase m*emory ca*rd for ni*kon Dig*tal Camer*for 1 month and create many posts using web 2 sites and linking to my own site like its the focal point and also linking to each other posts in web 2 ?

or what else can i do ? Please guide me through this process, im even ready if you are any one can tutor me i assure that i can work for my best and create a win-win strategy for both of us.

 

nice one for a beginner. I can see content but you should add some more modules and spice it up .. keep working on it. Get on the squidu forum and request the experts for a review; that will be more precise and worth it. good luck

 

Thanks mate, i will definitely do that. What module you would suggest ?

 

Squidoo has a lot of modules and they have added some amazing ones recently! try building a lens from scratch and add all the modules to try. This way you will know how and where to use certain modules. The more you play with them, the more you will get a hold! always use mods related to your content or niche! you dont want to put up netflix on a book lens

 

Useful site. 8/10

 

Yeah you need your own domain.

 

Thanks for all your suggestions.
@c0d36r34k3r Thanks for the score ill try to get 10 out of 10

 

We think your site looks great. We are so new to business and online, I don't feel very confident review yours.
First look, great colors and very eye catching. Good photo selection and content.

 

@MykkoWj - You well pointed your view as a visitor and i also need the review from a visitors point of view in addition to a webmasters point of view
Thanks buddy.

 

simple but interesting...
good job man...

 

I think it's good. Good choice of colours

 

I would have anchor links and go over the main bullets of your site with them... also give the ability to go back to the main list. I both like and do not like your green background if it was a diff rent niche maybe not a big deal thou...
I would also but a light color small border around your images of your cameras.

 

First thing first ...

• Add relevant photo to your profile, so that it can get some life.

• You should remove text links from your lens

• Try to keep adding fresh contents every week, to keep your rank high.

• Use photos modules (Polaroid) to make it more beautiful and attractive.

• Short the heading and use your keywords in titles.

Overall this one is nice and informative lens.

 

Thanks a lot for the replies.
@Lalit Burma sure i will update with what you said, Thanks

 

good job

i think enough

 

When are you going to make payments to me for the month of June, Mr Lalit Burma. I am losing my sleep over it. I sent 43X400 articles to you for this day.

 

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