Weight Loss Writings

Discussion in 'Websites' started by believer1984, Sep 25, 2009.

  1. #1
    I have a blog with articles about weight loss. The blog name is "Weight Loss Writings".

    Click on the next link to visit the blog, and you can post on this thread what you think about the blog: Weight Loss Writings

    Thank you.
     
    believer1984, Sep 25, 2009 IP
  2. DigitalPlease

    DigitalPlease Peon

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    #2
    I just read the first article on the first page that opened about the quick tips on metabolism. I think that it should be written better. There are some errors. No offence meant.
    But then who is speaking I probably make more errors than most.
    Otherwise good job:)
     
    DigitalPlease, Sep 25, 2009 IP
  3. wysiwyg4

    wysiwyg4 Peon

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    #3
    I like the one post to a screen writing.

    Looks like you were away between 2006 and 2009.

    Your last post was in May of this year.

    To be successful, have fresh and unique content - posts - on a
    regular basis, at least a couple a week.

    You could create other categories, for instance, reviews of others'
    programs.
     
    wysiwyg4, Sep 26, 2009 IP
  4. hilosale

    hilosale Peon

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    #4
    you choose a good niche to write blog...why??because i think there is so many people in the world confusing about weight loss,they does not know how to loose their weight..keep moving guys.

    regards,
     
    hilosale, Sep 26, 2009 IP
  5. spankmasterzodiac

    spankmasterzodiac Peon

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    Wow good idea it can work out with all the overweeighted people in the world
     
    spankmasterzodiac, Sep 26, 2009 IP
  6. mishi7

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    #6
    A nice clean site but unfortunately the content is nothing new to people who read this sort of thing - you need fresh new information. Also I agree with DigitalPlease - you need to use correct language but it's not as bad as a lot of sites I've seen. Definitely a lot of potential.
     
    mishi7, Sep 26, 2009 IP
  7. internetrocks

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    #7
    i like especially hadder of your blog but dude its so competing niche u have to give something good to your viewrs ............
     
    internetrocks, Sep 26, 2009 IP
  8. believer1984

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    Thanks everyone for your reviews.
     
    believer1984, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  9. shibli123

    shibli123 Well-Known Member

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    #9
    hoon.. i was somehow disappointed.. maybe this is because i clicked the link with huge expectations. anyways.. does placing one post per page brings any good for a site? just want to know.. thanks
     
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  10. believer1984

    believer1984 Peon

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    #10
    I think the quality of articles is one of the things that must be valued first on this blog. Can you tell me something about the quality of the articles on the blog?!

    I don't know on what you mean when you say does placing one article per page brings any good for a site. Can you tell me exactly on what you mean?!

    Thank you.
     
    believer1984, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  11. abinowbhat

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    You need to work on theme. Change the layout. content is ok.
     
    abinowbhat, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  12. shibli123

    shibli123 Well-Known Member

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    #12
    the content is fine and yeah quality of content is really vital. but if you think as a random visitor instead of a webmaster, i think you will realize that you really need to give them a good impression about your blog before they start reading your articles. a high quality article cant make any good if a visitor gets an impression that this place suc*s.

    i meant maybe you can place 5/6 posts per page. in that case you must have to use the --more-- code since the size of your articles are huge.

    thanks
     
    shibli123, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  13. conquer

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    #13
    Missing some navigation at the top of the site.
    you could put more articles on the frontpage :)
    Nice typography
     
    conquer, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  14. emiley

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    #14
    I think majority of people are moving in this very niche only.
    So, bringing out something different is very important!
     
    emiley, Sep 28, 2009 IP
  15. believer1984

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    #15
    Thank you for your advice.
     
    believer1984, Oct 9, 2009 IP