Hi everyone, Few days ago, I learnt a lotfrom gurus from this forum. Today, I finally have my own landing page. I hope I can get some opinions and suggestions. Please review my landing page. http://project-green-energy.blogspot.com/
Normally landing page will be longer, yours is too short. Make a bit details and get the words from the merchant site
Looks good overall. I like the layout. I'd suggest you to make another landing page. A bit longer, and try to softly pre-sell it. Meaning, try to be a bit softer, and don't try to pitch the product so directly as you're currently doing. Make it look unbiased. Your goal is to prepare the viewer for what he's gonna see, not to sell the product yourself, the sales page does that. Pre-sell is the key word. State some benefits of the product maybe, and also state why this product is the best in the market. I'm not saying that your current landing page is not good. The best thing to do would be to split test both your current landing page, and another one using the advice I provided.
I am a beginner at Clickbank, but if I was a buyer, then I would be more interested if I saw the landing page that with domain [dot]com and have testimonial. I think this is more profesioanal.
Pitch page looks good overall. A few suggestions: 1. You have a great product graphic - too bad you don't have a nice header so you can include professional-quality graphics right at the top of the page. 2. Big font size does sell - but your fonts vary a little too much. My eyes go from tiny to huge and back to tiny and back to huge. Makes it a little hard to read. Yes, change font size for amphasis... just make it a little less of a difference in size. 3. Take out the words "under $200". I know you're saying that you can build the stuff for under $200. But the first thing that pops into someone's mind when they glance at the page is, "Oh...this product will cost $200." Most people glance - they don't read. And you don't want to leave the impression that your product costs that much. If you do use the number $200, stick in in small print and place emphasis that the PROJECTS will cost less than 200 - and the product is under $30. Good luck to you.
Hi everyone, Thanks a lot for the suggestions. I will try to make changes soon. After I change my pre-sell page, I will get your opinions again. Thanks a lot.
Looks good to me, I think if you add a screenshot or 2 then that would show the product off and customers would be more interested to find out more. Are you going to be looking for Affiliates to push this product for you?