pls. review my landing page

Hi all,

I just created a landing page, it would be very helpful if you guys could give it a review

the website is How To Construct A Chicken Coop

thank you

 

Increase the size of the font, add more product to have 3 products reviewed

 

Frankly Speaking, its not looking professional. As shand0 had said increase your font size, keep good balance between images and content, keep the rating starts and book little upward and add some more valuable content in review.

One more thing, Strong call to action is also missing.
Following is a good example of a compare style LP.
http://copyps3games.net/

I hope this help, if you need any help let me know.

 

Hi,
Nice but I think that the words are too small.Most people will not read those words and leave.

 

increse font size. it is ok

 

Hi,

Looks good

A bit like my site: http://www.makeyourownchickencoop.com

Increase the font a little and also add some more "depth" to each review so it is clear why the top guide is top.

If you want any help with this give me a shout.

Also you may want to check out the affiliate area on my site above because there is quite a good review site on there that you can modify if you wish.

Also you can even add video if you wish for the aff area.

Let me know if you need any help?

Chris

 

thank you guys for your review
I took yours advice and change the font size and font type.

what do you guys think know?

also is the call to action paragraph in strong, strong enough to make sales?

thanks in advance

 

Hey - it's not bad.

I think the font size should be much bigger - it is hard to read.

Also, you need a better heading.

"How to Construct a Chicken Coop" doesn't really get me excited about buying your product.

How about:

"Imagine Waking Up Every Morning To FREE FRESH EGGS !"

YOu need to sell the emotion of having your own Chicken Coup.

 

Looks really good, people like when the website gets right to the point.