please review my website and suggest me! Thanks

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by forexman1, Sep 25, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hello everyone!

    I request you all to please review my website about diy solar panel guide review

    here's my website link : Home Made Energy


    I'm not native english speaking so please tell my site content grammar errors or spelling errors!

    Please tell me honestly what you think about it.

    It would be great if you could give me some suggestion for making some change on my site.

    Thanks for your time... :)
     
    forexman1, Sep 25, 2009 IP
  2. bazzii

    bazzii Peon

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    1. "Dear Friend, Would You Like To Know How You Can Easily Build Your Own Solar Panel To Power Your Entire Home. That Will Helped You" : all words starts with CAPS letters. You can arrange that ...

    2. So many grammatical errors are there.. you can look for a good content writer..
     
    bazzii, Sep 25, 2009 IP
  3. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The theme is simple and has interesting contents but has lot of grammatical errors to be corrected.
     
    netdriver788, Sep 25, 2009 IP
  4. forexman1

    forexman1 Active Member

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    Thanks for your kind words I already fix it and could you told me where can I find good content writer? I try some writer in DP forum seem not good.
     
    forexman1, Sep 26, 2009 IP