Looking for elaboration on sketched clothing logo - $10

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Cavanfishing, Sep 6, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi guys.

    I'm looking for an image copy of the following sketched logo which is for embroidery on cloth etc and I want it to have some colour in it similar to the colours from the main website Cavan Fishing but the design need not have much more in the way of detail due to the stitching involved. The font type is open to debate and I await your attempts.

    Anyway all I can afford for this one is $10 (Paypal payment on receipt of finished design).

    I will run this for 48 hrs. Thanks and good luck!

    [​IMG]
     
    Cavanfishing, Sep 6, 2009 IP
  2. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #2
    how about this one:
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  3. Cavanfishing

    Cavanfishing Guest

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    #3
    Not bad but can you make the tip look more hook like (with a barb) and maybe slightly heavier outline on the rest of the body.
     
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  4. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #4
    Thank you for feedback
    sure, I will submit an entry soon with modifications applied

    I hope you noticed that the font is played with to look like your hand writing
     
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  5. Cavanfishing

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    #5
    Yeah I know the drill. ;)


    Yes that looks good also. We are getting the drift anyway folks. Still not 100% sure about the end of the tail though, would still like it to be a bit more hook pronounced.. Nicer lines to but then the text can still be a bit more radical if you like.
     
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  6. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #6
    modified:
    [​IMG]
     
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    #7
    Heres my revised entry

    [​IMG]
     
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  8. lejka

    lejka Active Member

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    #8
    [​IMG]
     
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  9. Cavanfishing

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    #9

    Yes that's certainly a much better looking hook but can't quite put my finger on why it still aint gripping me. See if you can change font to something a bit more exciting other than what is in my photo sketch. and the hook end needs to be thinner, maybe add some more colour..

    Thanks
     
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  10. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #10
    another try with a different font

    [​IMG]:
     
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  11. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #11
    [​IMG]
     
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  12. Cavanfishing

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    #12
    We've lost a bit of the fish body now though and can you fade the blue into green a bit better and thicken the body end but the tail end is better now however still no sign of a hook.




    @Lejka I like the body shape and strength but the overall result isn't grabbing me I'm afraid.
     
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  13. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #13
    tip of the hook is thinner on this one:

    [​IMG]
     
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  14. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #14
    another font:
    [​IMG]
     
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  15. Cavanfishing

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    #15
    Could somebody elongate the body a bit more to have it stretched a bit more and the hook on the tail is imperative (not a devils tail lejka ;)) the font can be a bit different like Mohammad's attempt. Just giving feedback so we are all on the same wavelength here. :D


    Thanks folks.
     
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  16. Cavanfishing

    Cavanfishing Guest

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    #16
    Okay when I say elongate the body I mean like this fish shape


    [​IMG]
     
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  17. Smith15

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    #17
    here is my entry

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    ty
    feedback appreciated
     
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  18. gipanuhotko

    gipanuhotko Well-Known Member

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    #18
    My entry

    changes can be made, any feedback appreciated
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    Last edited: Sep 6, 2009
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    willhaynes Active Member

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    #19
    My entry:
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    -will
     
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    #20
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