Please Review my new humor site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Peace_Hope, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. #1
    I am working on my new site called A Funny Paradise. It offers funny jokes, quotes, pictures, videos, movies, and cartoons.

    Please take a look at the site and let me know what you think about it.

    All feedback and comments are welcome. Thanks,

    Alexander

    Website URL: www.AFunnyParadise.com
     
    Peace_Hope, Aug 8, 2006 IP
  2. pcoptimized

    pcoptimized Peon

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    #2
    Pretty good start. I know it's more work, but if you'd like to get your page rankings up, you might provide code for people to put on their sites to link back and pick up new quotes, etc. for their sites.
     
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  3. paulgee

    paulgee Well-Known Member

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    #3
    good site, needs a little more work but you can submit it to my Free Stuff Site if you want!

    http://www.free-stuff.me.uk
     
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    #4
    I'm not a huge fan of the header but I like how your site is content rich (which is more important!) :)
     
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  5. Klian

    Klian Member

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    I would work harder in the left menu.

    Try to set the same font and colour for the links in the left menu that you are using in your adsense banner on right.
     
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  6. Peace_Hope

    Peace_Hope Peon

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    You mean the code with a little link back to my website page? Or a link to each and every joke / quote / ect on the site?
     
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  7. Peace_Hope

    Peace_Hope Peon

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    Great Idea! I will get that all fixed up :)

    EDIT: Ok, I have changed the left menu up a little bit to match the right menu, let me know what you think of it now. Is there anything else you might edit to it?
     
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  8. Peace_Hope

    Peace_Hope Peon

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    What do you think would make the header better?
     
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    Shocka Well-Known Member

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    I would use the gray background instead of your current orange colors. I would make the text colorful and stand out against the gray.
     
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  10. Peace_Hope

    Peace_Hope Peon

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  11. fitnawake

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    to me its look like a "frontpage" site. but some small color and design changes it would be nice. or just pay a designer $50 to make you a unique and nice template
     
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  12. Peace_Hope

    Peace_Hope Peon

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    Yeah, I am paying a designer $150 for a nice template :)
     
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    #13
    In addition to the other suggestions, I think the content is very difficult to read. Maybe break it up a little and use the "more" feature.
    Also, I was looking for some humor. Maybe my sense of humor is not working, but I find nothing comical about DUI, getting injured by a drunk driver, etc.
    Maybe put some "one-liners" in between content (same topic as article). This will help to break it up, also. I am glad to see you are taking action. Congratulations.
     
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    #14
    I like your website ... structure, design, style, fonts are fine! There is nothing to add or remove!
     
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    Hi!
    I was looking forward to laughing my head off but when I clicked the link above it went to a website about how t secure bank loans :( i tried 3 times.
     
    Sunshine77, Aug 29, 2011 IP
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    #16
    Its nice, might look at a different wall paper
     
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    #17
    The design is not bad. I would suggest larger fonts and definitely more pictures.
     
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    #18
    very nice template:) but i think navigation of website must be in left, just my opinion.
     
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    #19
    site is very nice and contect used good.
     
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    #20
    The user interface is really simple,need to add some graphics.
     
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