Rip my Sales Page apart! I Beg You To.

Hello guys and girls.

I have just finished uploading my new sales page with a new sales copy which has been written by a fulltime copywriter so I hope you think its good.

I want to test this sales page out now and see what the conversions are like however I am also looking for you lot, as experienced Internet marketers, to rip it apart!

I would like you to tell me everything you hate and what I could do to improve it.

Please don't go easy, I want to get conversions WAY down.

So this is the page;

www.TheMigraineRelief.com

Some of you may of seen my previous posts asking for feedback with the affiliates page, so thank you again for everyones help up to now.

 

So far my only critique is that your page is not loading for me. You may need to invest in a heftier service provider.

Edit - Sorry this may be something on my end. It's opening just fine if I use FireFox. Checking it out now...

 

The clickbank checkout page is showing information about affiliate commissions, etc. next to the logo.

 

Thank you SO much for this. I never even picked up on this even when I had tested this out so many times. Thank you very much.

OK updated, thanks again

 

Testing this myself now and it is loading strangely in IE. GRRRRRR

Think I need to talk to my coder, thanks for picking this up for me.

Its loading slow too in IE using IE 7.

 

Overall I'd say its pretty good. I haven't had any of the previous technical issues either.

 

Thanks for your comments. Glad you had no issues too

 

Only this is to make testimonials bigger and bolder. Instead of two side by side, try one, center it, and make the font bigger.

I personally love reading testimonials, but you'rs are really tiny.

 

Ok thanks mate, I have had a lot of feedback talking about the testimonials so I shall change these asap.

 

You really are investing ALOT of money into this site....

 

I might be however you make that sound like a bad thing? =P

It will be a great product once things are perfected.

 

Everything looks GOOD in Mozilla Firefox. I didn't find any major issues.
The header part looks amazing.

 

It's so perfect I don't even know what to say

Probably what you could do is add a "picture header". Basically instead of typing the header message, create some image in Photoshop and put it as a headline. This will allow you to make it more attractive and noticable.

Also if you want, you can get a LiveFace actor? Although, it might be a bit costy...

 

Thank you everyone OK an update:

I have created an account with intellichat or something similar to that which is going to add a chat box if someone goes to click off the page with a discount, yes I know it can be annoying but it should improve conversions.

As for everyone's feedback here, I created a list and have been going through it today.

I added the testimonial boxes closer to the top of the page
I added order now buttons on every page
I added another order now button closer to the top
I tried to add one to the nav bar but it stretched to far so fixing that now
I did everything Alexa asked me to do (Thanks)
I spaced out the sub heading.
I have almost finished creating an opt in box and added a free tracker for subscribers.

Another major thing I did was added some more information about the product and another image, the prevent, treat and control box with the information surrounding it. Some feedback on this would be appreciated, I think it looks good and goes well but would like to know your opinions.

What else...erm.

Thats about all I think, just awaiting the javascript for the intellichat.

Any opinions?

Thanks again guys and girls.

 

Is it actually making sales??

 

Its not centered on my pc. image at the top didn't load.

Mike

 

yeah this product has very low gravity and it seems you are spending so much on it, are u sure it will be a success?

 

Yeah I am making sales, currently converting at less than 10 hops to every sale.

Thanks Mike, there are problems with it in IE currently fixing them, in Firefox it load perfectly.

Yeah its a new product and I havn't really tried promoting it much yet, I want to ensure it is perfect or at least great before I do.

I am sure it will be a success the factors for it to be a success are there just need to bring them together, thank you for your concerns.

Thanks guys.

 

Hey can I see a screen of your conversions? I think it will make a lot more affs want to promote it

 

I know it will. The reason I have not put it up yet is because I don't want loads and loads of Affs promoting it yet, until I know that even the beginners in affiliate marketing can convert easily and at the moment thats not the case.

If you don't believe me however, give me a shout and I will PM you a print screen of it

Hope you understand, there will be a launch thread appearing in the next 7 days or so, with screen shots and goodies for affs

Thanks
Will.