Review my Landing Pages

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by BurtGummer, Aug 9, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hey everyone! It's been about 1-2 weeks since started affiliate marketing with Clickbank. I can't say that I'm in the positives after Adwords, but I did make several newbie mistakes that costed me money.

    Anyways, I've been learning HTML, and have been trying to make quality landing pages. I KNOW they are crap, so I'd like to get some tips on how to improve them. I do have Photoshop knowledge too.

    www.bowl-better.net -1 sale, 37 hops
    www.cb-code-truth.net -1 sale, 171 hops(I've got some 10/10 keywords so still running it)
    www.RepressTheSweat.com -no sales, 19 hops
    www.RegCleaner-Review.com -2 sales, 52 hops
    www.the-forex-machine.net -no sales, 5 hops (not running right now)

    Sites that got ALOT of clicks but no sales (not running right now).

    www.get-bigger-naturally.com 44 hops
    www.get-bigger-naturally.com/PA.html 39 hops
    www.get-bigger-naturally.com/PS.html 6 hops

    Tell me what could be changed/improved. Reaons why would be serious plusses.

    Thanks for taking your time to do this!
     
    BurtGummer, Aug 9, 2009 IP
  2. patswald

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    I looked at your landing pages. Really good ones I like the ideas. The one about Penis Enlargement made me laugh really loud!

    If you want to broaden your understand of the Landing pages, Review this and tell me if you love it, I have the package and For DP members goes for only $5. It has 2 landing pages, and some awesome niche products and keywords!
     
    patswald, Aug 9, 2009 IP
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  3. BurtGummer

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    Considering that your own sales page didn't capture my attention, I wouldn't really want to buy your product.......

    Still looking for some actual reviews though please! Thanks!
     
    BurtGummer, Aug 9, 2009 IP
  4. patswald

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  5. BurtGummer

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    I created this thread for members to review my pages, not to get sold a product.
     
    BurtGummer, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    Easy Buddy, Easy, Lets not make it a Duel over nothing, am gonna give your 2 Sites a good review and post here ASAP.
     
    patswald, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    Anyone have any reviews?
     
    BurtGummer, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    good basic stuff. more converting stuff needed. may be in few months u wld be delivering more better ones. cheers
     
    butternyk, Aug 10, 2009 IP