Urgent Site Review {please}

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by zinghana, Aug 7, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all

    I need some honest opinions regarding a site i have developed for a client, it's meant to look like a fun and interesting place to take your kids to:

    Website:
    kids indoor playcentre

    Site is 90% complete i need to add some info, and also redo a lot of the graphics, i have to show my clients work tomorrow so really would like some professional opinions.

    Thanks very much in advance for replies / reviews.
     
    zinghana, Aug 7, 2009 IP
  2. Dee2007

    Dee2007 Active Member

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    #2
    I like it, very bright and colourful :)

    Dee
     
    Dee2007, Aug 7, 2009 IP
  3. syafiqikhwan

    syafiqikhwan Banned

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    #3
    you are creative designer . i impress to see your template.
     
    syafiqikhwan, Aug 7, 2009 IP
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    silvestezr Peon

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    #4
    very nice site that you have :)
     
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    #5
    wow it's very funny site... I like it
     
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    drywall8 Peon

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    #6
    croc's playcentre is 450 sqft of nonstop.... EH! no, I do not like the header. Great work on the design but that long lengthy text is a no-no for me.
     
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  7. fifar

    fifar Peon

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    #7
    yes i agree
    i don't like the header, maybe you can make it shorter, like croc's playcentre.... :)
     
    fifar, Aug 8, 2009 IP
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    premiumscripts Peon

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    #8
    You should remove the mirror effect in the header text.
     
    premiumscripts, Aug 8, 2009 IP
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    #9
    a bit hard on the contrast sometimes with the boxes
    menu doesnt quite fit in
    need some line spacing on the croc's pannel
    header font isnt that great
     
    phangan, Aug 8, 2009 IP
  10. mozillamania

    mozillamania Banned

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    #10
    Yes, I agree... Remove the mirror effect...:)
     
    mozillamania, Aug 9, 2009 IP
  11. mpb

    mpb Greenhorn

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    #11
    Great design, logo, colors, etc.

    But I agree with the others who commented about the headline.

    Here's a shorter replacement:

    NON-STOP FUN FOR KIDS!

    -
     
    mpb, Aug 9, 2009 IP
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    #12
    every thing looks good...!
    i think you can improve the guest book contents more better and alignment
     
    digitalsense, Aug 9, 2009 IP
  13. zinghana

    zinghana Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your feedback guys, was a tricky site for me, i normally work with way more professional sites, but gave it a fair crack, i think the owners are happy with everything, i will updated some of the graphics soon and hopefully enhance the look.

    Regards Darren
     
    zinghana, Aug 9, 2009 IP
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    #14
    I think is really great site that looks interesting and have real value posts.
    The picture gallery is really cool :D
    Thanks for sharing
     
    Shery32, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    pantho Banned

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    #15
    cool colorful and awesome .....! good job...!

    Thanks :)
     
    pantho, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    #16
    Brilliant! Lots of great colours, info for the adults and easy navigation, you will not go wrong with that.
     
    qwertyman8, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Done a good effort and i like the color schemes,design and images.Personally i was impressed with picture gallery section.
     
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    N_Adra Peon

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    #18
    I really like the best, has a nice feel to it.
    Nice placement of the crocodile mascot on the right hand side.
     
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    #19
    Completely agree. Love the site, not the header so much.
     
    regster, Aug 10, 2009 IP
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    #20
    It loads pretty fast, the logo and the photos are catchy .
     
    justinlorder, Aug 10, 2009 IP