Thanks choicebro glad you found my article to be compelling. I wasn't sure if it had a good flow to it.
change the title of the guestbook to something more catchy, change the file names of your images so they include your keywords ;-)
nice job over all. To be honest I have no experance with Squidoo, but looking at your site there are two things that standout. At the very top of your lens next to the word Squidoo there is a big white empty box. This box really looks out of place like something is missing. Next your meta description is way to long. can you cut it down? Again I'm not sure how much control you have over the site and if it is possible to fix the two things I saw but wanted to bring them up just in case you can Site viewed with Firefox/3.0.12 GTB5
The big empty white box is where squidoo loads adsense and it also gives you a portion of the profit it makes off them. But as far as the meta description goes I am at a lost for it
Very nice, the article is well written and thought out. Curious to why you would not just place it on your own personal site?
This is actually an experiment. I read and e book a while back, think it was called something like bum marketing with squidoo. It was an interesting idea so I decided to give it a shot.
well as a new lensmaster, i think that is a good job. However, you can always improve the lens with more content and mods. Just check out some good lenses, join the squidu forum and ask the experts for reviews cheers